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跪求英语高手，帮我修改演讲稿！！！！！！！！！！！！！！ 语法错误，等。

Hello everybody.I'm …….I'm from …… .
It's my honor to speak here,and I am very glad to share my topic with you. Then today I'd like to talk something about how to succeed
Do you know Colonel Harland Sanders? He founded Kentucky Fried Chicken. Everyone thinks he is a very successful man. But who knows his fried chicken recipe has been rejected One thousand and nine times? He didn't give up,and finally achieved success
What would you do if you failed? Many people may choose to give up. However, the surest way to success is to keep your direction and stick to your goal.
On your way to success, you must keep your direction. It is just like a lamp, guiding you in darkness and helping you overcome obstacles on your way. Otherwise, you will easily get lost or hesitate to go ahead.
Direction means objectives. You can get nowhere without an objective in life.
so you can try to write your objective on paper and make some plans to achieve it. In this way, you will know how to arrange your time and to spend your time properly. And you should also have a belief that you are sure to succeed as long as you keep your direction all the time.
Thank you for listening,that's all

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最后一句Thank you for listening,that's all.
最好改一顺序.That's all,thank you for listening.
你的文章写得太好了,我找不到语法错误.