Question

英语短文改错

英语短文改错Getting rid of the bad habit of procrastination is now my goal in life. My first step was to set small targets what can be reached realistically. For example,I plan to set a timetable for my study. So after school,I will put finishing homework in the last place. Additionally,I will make a list of my important task including their due dates but follow my schedule strictly. I will avoid find excuses for putting them off. At same time,I will ask for my friends and parents to help me. By achieving this small targets,I have confident that I will overcome procrastination.

Answer 1

Getting rid of the bad habit of procrastination is now my goal in life. My first step was(改成is) to set small targets what（改成that） can be reached realistically. For example,I plan to set a timetable for my study. So after school,I will put finishing homework in the last(改成first) place. Additionally,I will make a list of my important task(改成tasks) including their due dates but(改成and) follow my schedule strictly. I will avoid find(改成finding) excuses for putting them off. At (此处加the)same time,I will ask for (去掉这个for)my friends and parents to help me. By achieving this(改成these) small targets,I have confident(改成confidence) that I will overcome procrastination.

追答

一共十个错误！

Answer 2

1.第一句were改成are。讲述现在发生的动作2.第二句改为aswellas,他们在城市中有很多机会也有很多困难asgoodas是“像……一样“或”像……一样好“的意思。.AaswellasB.A.B也一样3.第三句opportunity改成复数opportunities。4.第四句brighter前面加个a。goodeducation那里没错，但感觉句意上来说bettereducation可能更好5.第六句affordtolive6.第七句helpthem7.最后一句happily

Answer 3

was改为is,what改为which,put finishing改为finish,task 改为tasks,but改为and,find改为finding,this改为these,confident改为confidence