Question

请教一篇英语改错

一共有十个错误。
原文：
When the Second World War began,John who wanted to join the army. He was only 16 years old,and boys allowed to join only if they were at 18.So when the army doctor examined him,he said that he was 18.But John's brother has joined the army a few days before,and a same doctor had examined him. This doctor remembered the old boy's family name,so when he saw John's papers he was surprising.“How old are you?” he asked. “Eighteen,sir,” said John. “So your brother is eighteen,too.” said the doctor.“Are you twins?” “Oh,no,sir,”said John,and her face turned red. “Mm,my brother is five months older than me.”

Answer 1

When the Second World War began,John who wanted to join the army. He was only 16 years old,and boys (加上were) allowed to join only if they were at (去掉at)18.So when the army doctor examined him,he said that he was 18.But John's brother has (改成had)joined the army a few days before(改成ago),and a（改成the) same doctor had examined him. This doctor remembered the old boy's family name,so when he saw John's papers he was surprising(改成surprised).“How old are you?” he asked. “Eighteen,sir,” said John. “So your brother is eighteen,too.” said the doctor.“Are you twins?” “Oh,no,sir,”said John,and her(改成his) face turned red. “Mm,my brother is five months older than me.”
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Answer 2

When the Second World War began,John who(删除who) wanted to join the army. He was only 16 years old,and boys (添加were)allowed to join only if they were at 18.So when the army doctor examined him,he said that he was 18.But John's brother has(改为had) joined the army a few days before(改为ago),and a(改为the) same doctor had examined him. This doctor remembered the old(elder) boy's family name,so when he saw John's papers (添加，）he was surprising（改为surprised).“How old are you?” he asked. “Eighteen,sir,” said John. “So(改为and) your brother is eighteen,too.” said the doctor.“Are you twins?” “Oh,no,sir,”said John,and her(改为his) face turned red. “Mm,my brother is five months older than me(改为I).”

Answer 3

when the Second World War began, John （1.who去掉） wanted to join the army. He was only 16 years old, (2.and改成but，表示转折） boys （3.加入were） allowed to join only if they were at 18. So when the army doctor examined him, he said that he was 18. But John's brother （4.has改成had） joined the army a few days before, and （5.a改成the） same doctor had examined him （6.加入too）. This doctor remembered the （7.old改成older） boy's family name, so when he saw John's papers, he was （8.surprising改成surprised）. "How old are you?" he asked. "Eighteen, sir," said John. "(9.So改成But） your brother is eighteen, too," said the doctor. "Are you twins?""Oh, no, sir," said John, and (10.her改成his） face turned red. "Mm, My brother is five months older than me."

第二次世界大战开始了，约翰想参军，可他只有十六岁，当时规定男孩到十八岁才能入伍。所以军医给他进行体检时，他说他已经十八岁了。
可约翰的哥哥刚入伍没几天，而且也是这个军医给他做的检查。这位医生还记得他哥哥的姓。所以当他看到约翰的表格时，感到非常惊奇。
你多大了？军医问。
十八，长官。约翰说。
可你的哥哥也是十八岁，你们是双胞胎吗？
约翰脸红了，说：哦，不是，长官，我哥哥比我大五个月。

Answer 4

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