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麻烦英语好的大神来帮我把这个翻译成英文 这是表妹的留学申请，看看哪位英语好的大神可以帮忙翻译成英

麻烦英语好的大神来帮我把这个翻译成英文

这是表妹的留学申请，看看哪位英语好的大神可以帮忙翻译成英文…谢谢。

1）选择工商管理是一个能自我锻炼也能了解市场间的规则，能培养我的国际视野，可以在商业的各个领域都有学习的机会。
2）因为堪培拉大学会提供“人人有份、机会均等的综合学习”堪培拉也是在澳大利亚历史中最悠久的语言学校之一，同时堪培拉能丰富我的校园生活
3）首先澳大利亚是最安全的城市也是一个年轻的城市，在一个高等教育率最高的城市学习我能与人沟通交流、能学会我所选择的专业重要性。我认为我选择在澳大利亚学习是一个正确的选择。
4）工商管理是我的一种兴趣，同时因为父亲的公司是从一个白手起家的状态发展起来的，想在以后用我所学到的知识与经验能应用在针对性的管理中，

Answer 1

辛苦手动翻译。 中文上的问题修改优化了， 段落顺序调整得符合逻辑了。

1 Australia is the most secure and a young city. It is significant that i am studying in a city with the highest rate of Higher Education. And where Improve the ability to communicate with others. I believe I choose to study in Australia is a best choice.

2 the University of Canberra is provide "everyone, equal opportunity of the comprehensive study”,and it is one of the Australia’s oldest language school, and it can enrich my campus life.

3 Business administration is my interest. At the same time,my father's company is from a self-made, he give me a way froward. I hope i can help him by using my knowledge in the future.

4 The choice of business management is a self exercise,it can help me to understand the rules of the market, in addition it can broaden my international horizon, what’s more it can help me to having opportunities to learning all areas of business.

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谢谢你

Answer 2

1) the choice of business management is a self exercise can also understand the rules of the market, can develop my international vision, can be in business in all areas of learning opportunities.2) because the University of Canberra will provide "everyone, equal opportunity of the comprehensive study" one of the language school in Canberra is also in the history of Australia's oldest and Canberra can enrich my campus life3), Australia is the most secure city is a young city, in a higher education rate of cities with the highest learning I can and communication, can I choose the professional importance to. I think I choose to study in Australia is a right choice.4) business administration is my interest, at the same time because his father's company is from a self-made, want to after I learned the knowledge and experience can be applied in the management.

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