Question

短文改错几题，求解

这一句中有两个错误
Dose it sound surprised?I had this dream when I was only a child.I love children.
下面一句中有一个错误。
Today is my first day at a new school in Australia.

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Answer 1

1. 改正：Does it sound (surprising)? I had this dream when I was only a child. I (loved) children.
解释：surprised意思是“感到惊讶的”，而surprising意思是“令人感到惊讶的”。句意为“它（指我的梦想）听起来令人感到惊讶吗？”，所以必须改用surprising；
句子I loved children.指的是作者当时有的梦想（had/was），所以必须用一般过去时。

2. 改正：Today is my first day at (the) new school in Australia.
解释：根据句意“今天是我呆在澳大利亚新学校的第一天”，其中的new school in Australia明显为特指，不是泛指，所以必须改用定冠词the.

Answer 2

改成：
Dose it sound （surprising）? I （had） had this dream when I was only a child. I love children.
（形容物用surprising，when引导时间状语从句，从句一般过去时，主句过去完成时。）
Today is my first day （in） a new school in Australia.
（at school ， in a school固定用法）

Answer 3

surprised 改成surprising,surprised用于人的感觉，而surprising则用于强调事情“令人惊讶”

第二句不多说了，错得离谱
today is my first day to study at a new school in Australia