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After a day of work, the body needs have a rest.Sleep is necessary for good heaithy.The rest you get while sleeping make your body able to prepare itself the next day.There are four levels of sleep.Each is a little deep than the one before .As you sleep, your body relaxes. Your heart beats more slow and your brain slows down.If you have trouble falling sleep,some people suggest breathing slowly and deeply and the other people believe drink warm milk will help you sleep well. Will you try them both?

Answer 1

After a day of work, the body needs(to) have a rest.Sleep(改为Sleeping) is necessary for good heaithy(改为health).The rest you get while sleeping make(makes) your body able to prepare itself the next day.There are four levels of sleep(改为sleeping).Each is a little deep(改为deeper) than the one before .As you sleep(改为sleeping), your body relaxes. Your heart beats(are) more slow and your brain slows down.If you have trouble falling sleep,some people suggest breathing(改为tobreath) slowly and deeply and the other people believe drink(改为drinking) warm milk will help you sleep well. Will you try them both?

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Answer 2

After a day of work, the body needs 【to】have a rest.Sleep is necessary for good 【health】.The rest you get while sleeping 【makes】 your body able to prepare itself 【for】the next day.There are four levels of sleep.Each is a little 【deeper】 than the one before .As you sleep, your body relaxes. Your heart beats more 【slowly】 and your brain slows down.If you have trouble falling 【asleep】,some people suggest breathing slowly and deeply and【/】 other people believe 【drinking】 warm milk will help you sleep well. Will you try them both?

Answer 3

1. needs to have a rest
2. ...for good health.
3....makes your body....
4. for the next day.
5. a little deeper
6. the one before改成the previous one
7. more slowly
8. falling asleep
9. other people （去掉前面的the)
10. drinking warm milk

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Answer 4

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After a day's work, the body needs to have a rest.Sleep is necessary for good healthy.The rest you get while sleeping makes your body able to prepare itself for the next day.There are four levels of sleep, each is a little deeper than the one before .As you sleep, your body relaxes. Your heart beats more slowly and your brain slows down.If you have trouble falling asleep,some people suggest breath slowly and deeply, and the other people believe that drink warm milk will help you sleep well. Will you try them both?