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今天开始第二天的实习todayismyseconddaytodomyintetnship早上我和我的educator带了孩子们去外面散步并且去公园玩inthemornin...
今天开始第二天的实习
today is my second day to do my intetnship
早上我和我的educator带了孩子们去外面散步并且去公园玩
in the morning , me and my educator take the kids out for a walk and go play in the Park
孩子们都超高兴的
they are all super exciting and happy
而且我发现孩子们都超容易满足和超容易兴奋的
I found that the kids are all easily to get satisfied and easily excited
他们看到大货车经过或看到动物时,都会超兴奋的尖叫
when they see the truck passing by or see the animal, they all exciting and then screaming
对孩子们而言 这些事都是很新鲜很有趣的
they are all very fresh and interesting for the children
後来我们去公园玩 孩子们都非常开心
Later, when we go to the park , children are very happy
因为他们可以去玩平常在教室里面玩不到的游乐设施
becaure they can play the equipment that they can't useally to play in this class room
例如汤秋千; 孩子们都争先恐後的抢著要玩呢 \
for example swing,
当然为了安全起见 我们都在旁边陪著以及监督他们玩
我认为花时间陪孩子们玩是件非常重要的事, 因为通过这样的交流
我们可以和孩子建立一个非常有意义,有互动的的关系
For security reasons we have to stand on the side supervize them when them play
I think to spend time to play with children is very important, because through this
we can build a very meaningful and interaction relationship with them.
後来外面之後我们就返回教室准备吃午餐了
下午我们做了一个science活动
班上来了一个男老师 他带了材料过来 教孩子们做小猪形状的面包
孩子们自己亲手做,亲手捏造属於他们自己的小猪形状的面包
後来放进烤箱烤完之後,老师发给孩子们吃
孩子们都吃的津津有味
after finish outdise walking and playing, we go back to the daycare and get ready for the lunch
we did a science activity in the afternoon
there is a guy coming in to my classroon, he bring the materinal to teach children to make a piggy bread
children are all made by their hands, they make their own piggy bread
after put into the ovan and wait a whild
my educator hand in the piggy bread to the children
they are all very enjoy eating their own piggy bread
这个活动不但训练了孩子们的创造力
也给孩子们很大的成就感,吃著自己做的面包
真的是个很棒的活动
The activities have training of children's creativity
also gave the kids great sense of accomplishment, eat the bread they made by use their hands
thie is a great activities for children
also is a good experience for me
those two day internship i have learned something
children are actually very smart and have their own thought
as an educator or parents if we take the time and be patient to teach them
they can do many things more as we thought
they have enough capacity to do many different things
for examples change their own shoes and fix their own bed or clean the foods etc those things are what i observe 展开
today is my second day to do my intetnship
早上我和我的educator带了孩子们去外面散步并且去公园玩
in the morning , me and my educator take the kids out for a walk and go play in the Park
孩子们都超高兴的
they are all super exciting and happy
而且我发现孩子们都超容易满足和超容易兴奋的
I found that the kids are all easily to get satisfied and easily excited
他们看到大货车经过或看到动物时,都会超兴奋的尖叫
when they see the truck passing by or see the animal, they all exciting and then screaming
对孩子们而言 这些事都是很新鲜很有趣的
they are all very fresh and interesting for the children
後来我们去公园玩 孩子们都非常开心
Later, when we go to the park , children are very happy
因为他们可以去玩平常在教室里面玩不到的游乐设施
becaure they can play the equipment that they can't useally to play in this class room
例如汤秋千; 孩子们都争先恐後的抢著要玩呢 \
for example swing,
当然为了安全起见 我们都在旁边陪著以及监督他们玩
我认为花时间陪孩子们玩是件非常重要的事, 因为通过这样的交流
我们可以和孩子建立一个非常有意义,有互动的的关系
For security reasons we have to stand on the side supervize them when them play
I think to spend time to play with children is very important, because through this
we can build a very meaningful and interaction relationship with them.
後来外面之後我们就返回教室准备吃午餐了
下午我们做了一个science活动
班上来了一个男老师 他带了材料过来 教孩子们做小猪形状的面包
孩子们自己亲手做,亲手捏造属於他们自己的小猪形状的面包
後来放进烤箱烤完之後,老师发给孩子们吃
孩子们都吃的津津有味
after finish outdise walking and playing, we go back to the daycare and get ready for the lunch
we did a science activity in the afternoon
there is a guy coming in to my classroon, he bring the materinal to teach children to make a piggy bread
children are all made by their hands, they make their own piggy bread
after put into the ovan and wait a whild
my educator hand in the piggy bread to the children
they are all very enjoy eating their own piggy bread
这个活动不但训练了孩子们的创造力
也给孩子们很大的成就感,吃著自己做的面包
真的是个很棒的活动
The activities have training of children's creativity
also gave the kids great sense of accomplishment, eat the bread they made by use their hands
thie is a great activities for children
also is a good experience for me
those two day internship i have learned something
children are actually very smart and have their own thought
as an educator or parents if we take the time and be patient to teach them
they can do many things more as we thought
they have enough capacity to do many different things
for examples change their own shoes and fix their own bed or clean the foods etc those things are what i observe 展开
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今天开始第二天的实习
Today is the second day of my intetnship.
早上我和我的educator带了孩子们去外面散步并且去公园玩
In the morning, my educator and I took the kids for a walk and play in the park.
孩子们都超高兴的
They are all super exciting and happy! （不用改）
而且我发现孩子们都超容易满足和超容易兴奋的
I found that the kids are all easily to get satisfied and easily excited.
他们看到大货车经过或看到动物时,都会超兴奋的尖叫
When they see the trucks passing by or see the animal, they all are exciting and then screaming!
对孩子们而言 这些事都是很新鲜很有趣的
For them, everything is very new and interesting.
後来我们去公园玩 孩子们都非常开心
We went to the park later , and children are very happy.
因为他们可以去玩平常在教室里面玩不到的游乐设施
Because they can play something they can't usually play in the classroom.
例如荡秋千; 孩子们都争先恐後的抢著要玩呢
For example, kids can't wait to play the swing.
当然为了安全起见 我们都在旁边陪著以及监督他们玩
我认为花时间陪孩子们玩是件非常重要的事, 因为通过这样的交流
我们可以和孩子建立一个非常有意义,有互动的的关系
For safety reasons, we have to stay with them and supervise while they are playing. I believe spending time to play with children is very important and meaningful, because an interactive relationship can be built with each other through these communications.
後来外面之後我们就返回教室准备吃午餐了
下午我们做了一个science活动
班上来了一个男老师 他带了材料过来 教孩子们做小猪形状的面包
孩子们自己亲手做,亲手捏造属於他们自己的小猪形状的面包
後来放进烤箱烤完之後,老师发给孩子们吃
孩子们都吃的津津有味
We went back to church after walking and playing outside, and get ready for lunch.
We had an activity related to science in the afternoon.
There comes a male teacher, who brought ingredients to our class and teach kids to bake pig-shape bread.
After many times of trying, kids can finally make their own pig-shape bread by hand.
After bake them in the oven, teachers gave the baked bread to kids for eating, and they all like them.
这个活动不但训练了孩子们的创造力
也给孩子们很大的成就感,吃著自己做的面包
真的是个很棒的活动
This activity has not just train kids' creativity, but they also receive feeling of great success after eating their hand-make bread. That activity is very good!
(下面没有中文原文，我只修改)
This is a great activities for children, and also a good experience for me in two days of internship.
Children are actually very smart and have their own thoughts.
Being an educator or parents, we should be patient and spend more time to teach them.
They can do much more things than we can imagine.
They have enough capacity to do many different things
for example， they changed their own shoes and made their own bed or clean the foods etc. Those things are what i observe during my intern.
Today is the second day of my intetnship.
早上我和我的educator带了孩子们去外面散步并且去公园玩
In the morning, my educator and I took the kids for a walk and play in the park.
孩子们都超高兴的
They are all super exciting and happy! （不用改）
而且我发现孩子们都超容易满足和超容易兴奋的
I found that the kids are all easily to get satisfied and easily excited.
他们看到大货车经过或看到动物时,都会超兴奋的尖叫
When they see the trucks passing by or see the animal, they all are exciting and then screaming!
对孩子们而言 这些事都是很新鲜很有趣的
For them, everything is very new and interesting.
後来我们去公园玩 孩子们都非常开心
We went to the park later , and children are very happy.
因为他们可以去玩平常在教室里面玩不到的游乐设施
Because they can play something they can't usually play in the classroom.
例如荡秋千; 孩子们都争先恐後的抢著要玩呢
For example, kids can't wait to play the swing.
当然为了安全起见 我们都在旁边陪著以及监督他们玩
我认为花时间陪孩子们玩是件非常重要的事, 因为通过这样的交流
我们可以和孩子建立一个非常有意义,有互动的的关系
For safety reasons, we have to stay with them and supervise while they are playing. I believe spending time to play with children is very important and meaningful, because an interactive relationship can be built with each other through these communications.
後来外面之後我们就返回教室准备吃午餐了
下午我们做了一个science活动
班上来了一个男老师 他带了材料过来 教孩子们做小猪形状的面包
孩子们自己亲手做,亲手捏造属於他们自己的小猪形状的面包
後来放进烤箱烤完之後,老师发给孩子们吃
孩子们都吃的津津有味
We went back to church after walking and playing outside, and get ready for lunch.
We had an activity related to science in the afternoon.
There comes a male teacher, who brought ingredients to our class and teach kids to bake pig-shape bread.
After many times of trying, kids can finally make their own pig-shape bread by hand.
After bake them in the oven, teachers gave the baked bread to kids for eating, and they all like them.
这个活动不但训练了孩子们的创造力
也给孩子们很大的成就感,吃著自己做的面包
真的是个很棒的活动
This activity has not just train kids' creativity, but they also receive feeling of great success after eating their hand-make bread. That activity is very good!
(下面没有中文原文，我只修改)
This is a great activities for children, and also a good experience for me in two days of internship.
Children are actually very smart and have their own thoughts.
Being an educator or parents, we should be patient and spend more time to teach them.
They can do much more things than we can imagine.
They have enough capacity to do many different things
for example， they changed their own shoes and made their own bed or clean the foods etc. Those things are what i observe during my intern.
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