Question

求以下内容翻译成商函格式，中 译 英。正式文体非口语

邀 请 函
尊敬的先生：
2010年8月25日我公司将在中国北京举行啤酒养生国际专家论坛会，这是关于啤酒生产以及研究领域的一次盛会，是啤酒养生文化交流与合作的平台。论坛将邀请国内外从事啤酒研究的专家、学者举办讲座，鉴于您在啤酒领域的研究与取得的成果，主办方诚邀您参加本次大会，就啤酒的研究动态及最新的研究成果做专题的讲座进行交流、探讨，同时邀您（及夫人）参加8月25日的啤酒文化节，组委会将负责您的往返机票及在中国的相关费用。
再次邀请你参加此次大会，恭候您的回复。

Answer 1

Invitation

Dear Sir,

There will be an International Expert Forum on Nutrient Beers organized by our company and it will be held on 25th August 2010 in Beijing, China. This is a distinguished gathering concerning the field of beer production and research, a platform for exchanges and co-operations of nutrient beer culture. The forum shall invite experts and scholars here and abroad to conduct a symposium on beer research. In view of your achievements on beer research, you are cordially invited to grace the forum for exchanges and discussions with a specific lecture on activities and latest findings on beer research.
At the same time, we would like to invite you and your wife to attend a beer festival which will be held on the same date; the organizing committee will bear the return air fare and the relevant expenses in China.
We once again extend our cordial invitation to you and look forward to receiving your reply. Thank you.

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Answer 2

Invitation Letter
Dear Sir,
August 25, 2010 our company will hold the Beer health forum of international experts in Beijing China, this is the grand meeting about the beer production, the research in cultural exchanges and cooperation in beer health platform. Forum will invite the abroad experts and scholars to give talks, in view of your study in the field in the beer and the results, the research on the dynamics of beer and the latest research achievements topic seminars to communicate, explore, the organizers of Forum sincere want to invite you (and Mrs.)to participate in the beer festival on August 25, the organizing committee will be responsible for your air tickets and related costs in China.
We really hope that you can join this forum, waiting for your reply.

你中文里面邀请的语句说了2遍，而且语序有点不通，我帮你去掉了前面的一次邀请，只把后面的 邀请您（及夫人） 这个保留了，整体就通畅了很多，纯手工，反复校对，希望能帮到你。

Answer 3

Invite a letter
Honorable Sir:
My company will hold the international beer expert of life forum meeting in Chinese Beijing on August 25 , 2010 , this is platform as far as beer produces the exchange and cooperation as well as, studying a grand gathering of field , being culture of beer of life's. The forum will invite home and abroad to be engaged in the expert that beer studies , the scholar holds a lecture, achievement studying and getting because you are in the beer field's, auspices Fang Cheng invites you to join the originally inferior assembly , the lecture being used for a special subject with regard to the beer research development and up to the minute research result carries out exchange , investigation and discussion , culture saves the beer inviting you (and Madam) to participate in August 25 at the same time , the organization committee will be in charge of your passenger ticket going there and back and the relevance cost being member of Chinese. Invite you to join this assembly once again, restoration awaiting respectfully for you.
绝对的！
他们的不对，因为首先“尊敬的先生：
”他们翻译的是“Dear Sir”，dear是“亲爱的”的意思！

Answer 4

第3个不错，我就不重复了