英语短文改错,求详解

TheStudents’Uniondecidedtoorganizeamusic1_______week.ItwillbeheldonthefirstweekofMay.... The Students’ Union decided to organize a music 1_______
week . It will be held on the first week of May . The 2________
activities include singing pop songs and play classical 3_______
and folk music . Take your own musical instruments , 4________
please . A music contest will be including . The 5_________
students take part in the contest will listen to one part 6_______
of a song or a piece of music , and then guess that 7________
where it comes from . If you will take part in this music 8______
week , please come and sign up to it before April 9_______
20th . The place for activities will be announced later . 10_______
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1. decided → decides
此文为通知,常用时态是一般现在时。

2. on → in
on指具体的某天,而a week为一个时间段,所以用in表示“在...期间”。

3. play → playing
和singing并列,做include的宾语,所以用动名词形式。

4. and → or
个人表演节目为“演奏古典音乐”或(or)“民间音乐”,而不能同时演奏两种音乐。

5. including → included
句意为被动,即“将会被包括在内”,所以用过去分词included.

6. take → taking
句子谓语动词为will listen,所以用现在分词taking part in the contest做后置定语,修饰主语the students.

7. 去掉that
guess后的宾语从句的引导词为where,而不能再多加一个that.

8. 去掉will
if引导的条件状语从句,用一般现在时代替一般将来时。

9. to → for
固定短语:sign up for sth,意思是“报名参加...”。

10. √ (无错)

参考资料: 英语牛人团团员

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1.去the,后面为专有名词,不要the
2.on 改为in 大时间用in,某天或某天的上/中/下午才用on
3.play加ing,和前面的singing并列结构
4.musical改为music,和后面的instruments意为音乐器材
5.including改为included,应该是被动结构,
6.take 改为taking 现在分词作后置定语
7.去that。一个从句中不可能出现两个关系词
8.去will If引导的条件状语从句用一般现在时
9.to 改为for
10无错。
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The Students’ Union 【decide】 to organize a music
week. It will be held 【in】the first week of May . The
activities include singing pop songs and 【playing】 classical
and folk music . Take your own 【music】 instruments ,
please . A music contest will be 【included】 . The
students 【who】take part in the contest will listen to one part
of a song or a piece of music , and then guess 【/】
where it comes from . If you 【/】take part in this music
week , please come and sign up 【for】it before April
20th . The place for activities will be announced later .
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