Question

高三英语改错？

As it is known to all, the Great Wall is the most famous places of interest in China
. Then, this summer vacation, the day I have been looking forward to coming at last. I got
up very early that day and set off with my brother Tim followed behind. After two hours'
bus ride, we arrived at which looked like the large market, where there were millions of peopl
e talking, pushing and photographing. Looking at that, my enthusiasm immediate disappeared. I
ndeed, the Great Wall is really something must be experienced with a little ease and privacy.

Answer 1

As it is known to all, the Great Wall is the most famous places of interest in China
. Then, this summer vacation, the day I have been looking forward to coming at last. I got up very early that day and set off with my brother Tim followed behind. After two hours' bus ride, we arrived at which looked like the large market, where there were millions of people talking, pushing and photographing. Looking at that, my enthusiasm immediate disappeared. I ndeed, the Great Wall is really something must be experienced with a little ease and privacy.
Line 1 it------>it 删 ； places----->place
Line 2 have---->had; coming---->came;
Line 3 followed---->following
Line 4 which--->what; the----> a
Line 5 Looking---->When I looked
Line 6 immediate-----> immediately; something must------>something /\ that must
must----->should