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请高手帮我修改一下 我写的英语句子的语法 拜托了 需要有人指出错误帮我修正一下

正在写5个 anedotol
有些写的不是很通顺 请帮我修改一下语法或句子不通顺的地方 拜托了

1) After mom goes off to work, they are playing around; climbing on the table, running around,but worse, one of the kids make pees in the truck. So the dads have to cleanout the truck and ask them to get out from the toilet. ( because the kids

2) The kids refuses to listen. They refused to listen whatever their parents says (for example, the dad ask Gigda to sit down and eat the meal, she says ‘’ no, I don’t want that. And dad didn’t do anything to help her eat the meal. In the next day, the other kid get refused to eat as well.

3) The kids have no Self-discipline all. They do whatever they wants; drawing on thewalls, destroy things and hitting each other and so on.

4) When mom started to get the kids involved to some craft time. Mom asks Geoda:‘do you want tofinish your picture, Geoda?’’ ‘’take out this from your finger and stoptouching it and use glue stick and make your picture !). The mother didn’t givethe child freedom to do what she wants. She ignore the child when Geoda says’’help me, help me’’.

5) Mom decided that she take the kids out for relax a bit. But when Jo went out few minutes later, she can not see the mom anywhere. She noticed that there are two kids without being supervised

Answer 1

1) After mom goes off to work, they are playing around; climbing on the table, running around,but worse, one of the kids make pees in the truck. So the dads have to cleanout the truck and ask them to get out from the toilet. ( because the kids

2) The kids refuses to listen. They refused to listen whatever their parents says (for example, the dad ask Gigda to sit down and eat the meal, she says ‘’ no, I don’t want that. And dad didn’t do anything to help her eat the meal. In the next day, the other kid get refused to eat as well.

3) The kids have no Self-discipline all. They do whatever they wants; drawing on thewalls, destroy things and hitting each other and so on.

4) When mom started to get the kids involved to some craft time. Mom asks Geoda:‘do you want tofinish your picture, Geoda?’’ ‘’take out this from your finger and stoptouching it and use glue stick and make your picture !). The mother didn’t givethe child freedom to do what she wants. She ignore the child when Geoda says’’help me, help me’’.

5) Mom decided that she take the kids out for relax a bit. But when Jo went out few minutes later, she can not see the mom anywhere. She noticed that there are two kids without being supervised