请高手帮我修改一下 我写的英语句子的语法 拜托了 需要有人指出错误帮我修正一下

正在写5个anedotol有些写的不是很通顺请帮我修改一下语法或句子不通顺的地方拜托了1)Aftermomgoesofftowork,theyareplayingarou... 正在写5个 anedotol
有些写的不是很通顺 请帮我修改一下语法或句子不通顺的地方 拜托了

1) After mom goes off to work, they are playing around; climbing on the table, running around,but worse, one of the kids make pees in the truck. So the dads have to cleanout the truck and ask them to get out from the toilet. ( because the kids

2) The kids refuses to listen. They refused to listen whatever their parents says (for example, the dad ask Gigda to sit down and eat the meal, she says ‘’ no, I don’t want that. And dad didn’t do anything to help her eat the meal. In the next day, the other kid get refused to eat as well.

3) The kids have no Self-discipline all. They do whatever they wants; drawing on thewalls, destroy things and hitting each other and so on.

4) When mom started to get the kids involved to some craft time. Mom asks Geoda:‘do you want tofinish your picture, Geoda?’’ ‘’take out this from your finger and stoptouching it and use glue stick and make your picture !). The mother didn’t givethe child freedom to do what she wants. She ignore the child when Geoda says’’help me, help me’’.

5) Mom decided that she take the kids out for relax a bit. But when Jo went out few minutes later, she can not see the mom anywhere. She noticed that there are two kids without being supervised
展开
 我来答
lovelove9876
2016-04-24 · TA获得超过5608个赞
知道小有建树答主
回答量:716
采纳率:0%
帮助的人:1016万
展开全部
1) After mom goes off to work, they are playing around; climbing on the table, running around,but worse, one of the kids make pees in the truck. So the dads have to cleanout the truck and ask them to get out from the toilet. ( because the kids

2) The kids refuses to listen. They refused to listen whatever their parents says (for example, the dad ask Gigda to sit down and eat the meal, she says ‘’ no, I don’t want that. And dad didn’t do anything to help her eat the meal. In the next day, the other kid get refused to eat as well.

3) The kids have no Self-discipline all. They do whatever they wants; drawing on thewalls, destroy things and hitting each other and so on.

4) When mom started to get the kids involved to some craft time. Mom asks Geoda:‘do you want tofinish your picture, Geoda?’’ ‘’take out this from your finger and stoptouching it and use glue stick and make your picture !). The mother didn’t givethe child freedom to do what she wants. She ignore the child when Geoda says’’help me, help me’’.

5) Mom decided that she take the kids out for relax a bit. But when Jo went out few minutes later, she can not see the mom anywhere. She noticed that there are two kids without being supervised
推荐律师服务: 若未解决您的问题,请您详细描述您的问题,通过百度律临进行免费专业咨询

为你推荐:

下载百度知道APP,抢鲜体验
使用百度知道APP,立即抢鲜体验。你的手机镜头里或许有别人想知道的答案。
扫描二维码下载
×

类别

我们会通过消息、邮箱等方式尽快将举报结果通知您。

说明

0/200

提交
取消

辅 助

模 式