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Thank you very much for (inviting) me to stay with you in Shanghai during the vacation.
I have been looking forward to (seeing) you again so that I need (加入to) get more help from you in my English learning. (But) I am afraid I can not go to your home (去掉in) this summer with them, because I have (promised) my grandparents, (who) live in the countryside, to spend the summer with them. They miss me (so) much that I find (加入it) difficult to refuse their request. I plan to visit you in winter if it (加入is) convenient to you .
参考资料：英语牛人团
Thank you very much for (inviting) me to stay with you in Shanghai during the vacation.
I have been looking forward to (seeing) you again so that I need (加入to) get more help from you in my English learning. (But) I am afraid I can not go to your home (去掉in) this summer with them, because I have (promised) my grandparents, (who) live in the countryside, to spend the summer with them. They miss me (so) much that I find (加入it) difficult to refuse their request. I plan to visit you in winter if it (加入is) convenient to you .
参考资料：英语牛人团
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