Question

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It was on August 10th, 1995 Zhou Ping was riding his bike to home. There was a river nearby. Suddenly he heard some shouted “Help! Help!” Hearing this he jumped his bike and ran to the river, and found there was a woman struggled in it. He jumped into the river not thinking of his own safety. He swam toward the woman as fast as possible. When he reached to the woman, he got hold of her hair and pulled her to the bank with all his strengths. The woman was saved. The next day the woman’s husband goes to the school to express his heartfelt thanks to Zhou Ping. Zhou Ping said he only did what he should do.
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It was on August 10th, 1995 Zhou Ping was riding his bike to home. There was a river nearby. Suddenly he heard some shouted “Help! Help!” Hearing this he jumped his bike and ran to the river, and found there was a woman struggled in it. He jumped into the river not thinking of his own safety. He swam toward the woman as fast as possible. When he reached to the woman, he got hold of her hair and pulled her to the bank with all his strengths. The woman was saved. The next day the woman’s husband goes to the school to express his heartfelt thanks to Zhou Ping. Zhou Ping said he only did what he should do.

Answer 1

事情发生在一九九五年八月十号，周平骑着自行车回家。附近有一条河。突然他听到有人在喊“救命，救命！”听到求救声，周平跳下自行车，奔向河边，他看到一个妇女正在河里挣扎。他并未考虑自己的生命安全，一个劲的扎入河中。他尽可能快的游向那个妇女。当他接近妇女的时候，他拽住妇女的脖子，用尽全力并把她拖到河岸边。那个女的获救了。第二天被救的女的丈夫赶到学校，衷心的感谢周平同学。周平说他只是做了自己应该做的事情而已。

It was on August 10th, 1995 Zhou Ping was riding his bike home. There was a river nearby. Suddenly he heard someone shouting “Help! Help!” Hearing this he jumped off his bike and ran to the river, and found there was a woman struggling against it. He jumped into the river with no thinking of his own safety. He swam toward to the woman as fast as possible. When he reached to the woman, he got hold of her neck and pulled her to the bank with all his strength. The woman was saved. The next day, the woman’s husband went to the school to express his heartfelt thanks to Zhou Ping. Zhou Ping said he only did what he should do.

Answer 2

那是1995年8月10号，周平骑车回家的路上，路边有条小河，忽然他听见有人在叫“救命”。听到呼救他跳下自行车，跑到河边，发现有个女人在水里挣扎。他完全没有考虑自己的安全问题就跳下了河，他以最快的速度游到她身边，当他够到她，就抓住她到头发，用尽全身力气把她往岸边拉，女人得救了。第二天，这位女士的丈夫到学校找到周平，表达他内心无比的感谢，但是周平只说这是他应该做的。
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