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TheMostExcitingMomentOnaMondaymorning,Iwenttoschoolbybus.WhileIwassittingonabus,Isawa...
The Most Exciting Moment
On a Monday morning, I went to school by bus. While I was sitting on a bus, I saw an oid man was asking for help so that other people maybe gave the seat to him. But nobody did this. I was so angry. I let the old man sit on my seat. He glad to me. At that moment, I felt excited. Because this is my first time to help others. 展开
On a Monday morning, I went to school by bus. While I was sitting on a bus, I saw an oid man was asking for help so that other people maybe gave the seat to him. But nobody did this. I was so angry. I let the old man sit on my seat. He glad to me. At that moment, I felt excited. Because this is my first time to help others. 展开
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On a Monday morning, I went to school by bus. While I was sitting on the bus, I saw an old man looking for help, hoping someone would gave his seat to him, but nobody did that. I felt really upset and I stood up , let him sit on my seat. He was glad and smlied to me. At that moment, I felt excited, because that was my first time helping others.
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