Question

我写了一篇英语作文，若按中考18分评分的话，可以得几分？还有，帮我修改一下全文好吗？非常感谢你！

The Most Exciting Moment
On a Monday morning, I went to school by bus. While I was sitting on a bus, I saw an oid man was asking for help so that other people maybe gave the seat to him. But nobody did this. I was so angry. I let the old man sit on my seat. He glad to me. At that moment, I felt excited. Because this is my first time to help others.

Answer 1

14至16分，
mistakes： I let I led
this is my first time to help others
was
that other people maybe gave
might

Answer 2

有些语法错误，12分左右吧！