Question

高一英语短文改错 在线等。

This morning, my foreign teacher Robert and I went to the park by taxi. On seen the beautiful trees and flowers, Robert couldn't wait to take pictur. It was at the moment when we found his camera gone. He searched all over his bag but just couldn't find one. Suddently it came to me he might have left it in the taxi. lucky, we found out the ticket and immediately got in the taxi company.About half an hour late ,the dirver returned with the camera. Both of us were grateful for the driver.Rober and I enjoy ourselves during the rest of the day 。

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This morning, my foreign teacher Robert and I went to the park by taxi. On 【1.seen改成seeing】 the beautiful trees and flowers, Robert couldn't wait to take pictur. It was at the moment 【2.when改成that 】we found his camera gone. He searched all over his bag but just couldn't find 【3.one改成it】. Suddently it came to me 【4.加上that】he might have left it in the taxi. 【5.lucky改成luckily】, we found【6. 去掉out 】the ticket and immediately got【7. in改成to 】the taxi company.About half an hour【8. late改成later】 ,the dirver returned with the camera. Both of us were grateful 【9.for改成to 】the driver.Rober and I 【10.enjoy改成enjoyed】 ourselves during the rest of the day 。
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