Question

看看这篇文章有没有什么语法错误

来个英语帝帮我看看这篇文章有没有什么语法错误。

我要演讲，于是在网上东拼西凑了几段，加了几句过渡句。问下饮食习惯怎么说,是food habit?the habit of food ?好吧我果然是个英语废柴=A=...顺便问一下，这句Finally I’d like to share some celebrities’views to afternoon tea with you怎么看怎么怪，求指教~

Today,let me tell you something about the British food culture .

First I’d like to talk about their habits of food
It is a long way from the place of work or school to home. The Britsh people tend to have a big breakfast before they go to work and the meal at mid-day is not spent with the members of the family but with workmates or schoolmates. Lunch is normally eaten between 12.30 pm and 1.30pm. Most people finish work at five thirty. It often takes at least an hour to get home from the school or workplace so people tend to eat their evening meal between 6.30pm and 8pm.
On Sundays people don't have to work so they take the opportunity to eat together with their family. Sunday lunch is usually the best meal of the week and many of the meals which are considered typically British are eaten for Sunday lunch. For example roast beef and pudding.

The most famous meal in Britain could be the traditional breakfast. What makes it so popular with British people and visitors alike?
British Breakfast,not,only,the toast with iam but also，sausage,bacon, mushroom,tomato,scone,baked beans and so on .

Afternoon tea is aslo imortant to the britishes.
Traditional afternoon tea consists of a selection of daintysandwiches scones served with clotted cream and preserves. Cakes and pastries are also served.

Finally I’d like to share some celebrities’views to afternoon tea with you
If you are cold, tea will warm you,
If you are too heated, it will cool you,
If you are depressed, it will cheer you,
If you are exhausted, it will calm you

万分感谢><

Answer 1

Lunch is normally eaten between 12.30 pm and 1.30pm.
这句改成：They have lunch between 12:30pm and 1:30.
Most people finish work at five thirty.
这句应该是Most people finish working at five thirty.这里是finish doing sth.
so people tend to eat their evening meal between 6.30pm and 8pm.
这句应该改成So people tend to have supper
between 6:30 and 8:00.
On Sundays people don't have to work so they take the opportunity to eat together with their family.
这句话的表述不好，改成They have a rest on sundays,so they take advantage of the opportunity to enjoy the food together with thier family.

Sunday lunch is usually the best meal of the week and many of the meals which are considered typically British are eaten for Sunday lunch. For example roast beef and pudding.
这句话表达混乱，应该这样改：It is the best meal for them to enjoy the food tegether with their family and roast beef and pudding usually are considered as the most typical food for them.

British Breakfast,not,only,the toast with iam but also，sausage,bacon, mushroom,tomato,scone,baked beans and so on .
这句缺少成分，改成：British breakfast , not only have the toast and iam,but also have bacon,mushroom ,tomato, scone, baked beans and so on.

Afternoon tea is aslo imortant to the britishes.
Traditional afternoon tea consists of a selection of daintysandwiches scones served with clotted cream and preserves. Cakes and pastries are also served.

你这段想要表达下午茶对英国人很重要，但是下面写的并不是这样，而是下午茶的构成。你自己想想，再作改正。
Finally I’d like to share some celebrities’views to afternoon tea with you。
这句话不对，改成Finally, I'd like to share some celebrities' views with afternoon tea to you as follows,

还有饮食习惯是the habits of food.

最后演讲开头口语：
Dear my teachers and Dear my classmates,
I'm glad to be here for make a speech and thank for your attention.

我个人的建议：你的语法不好，语感也不怎么好，多看一些语法书，有什么不懂的就多问，多背诵一些英语文章，对你的英语提高是大有长进。

祝你学习进步。

Answer 2

那个to换成about会不会感觉好点; 是the habit of food; warm you后加up 是使你暖起来的意思; Sunday后不用加s ;那个many meals那句总觉得怪怪的但也找不出毛病(我才14岁啊 定语从句一知半解) 我无能为力了~~