Question

英语短文改错！

1，One day I told Mrwang，our math teacher ，was ill 2，I was worried about him and went to see him after the school 3，When I enter his room，he struggled up to welcome 4，me．I let him lay down again．Mr wang looked pale. 5,Asked about his trouble ,he said he was having 6,a bad cold .Then he had a bad cough .After take some 7,medicine he was getting better. He asked me that we 8,liked the teacher who took place .When he heard 9,Finally l asked him don't to worry about the work 10,And have a good rest
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Answer 1

1，One day I told Mrwang，our math teacher ，was ill

在told 前面加个was，是有人告诉我数学老师病了，我被告知，被动。

2，I was worried about him and went to see him after the school

去掉the，放学后，就是after school。

3，When I enter his room，he struggled up to welcome

enter改为entered，时态问题

4，me．I let him lay down again．Mr wang looked pale.

lay 改为lie ，let sb. do sth. 用原型，躺下原型是lie，lay是过去时态。

5,Asked about his trouble ,he said he was having

asked 前面加 when

6,a bad cold .Then he had a bad cough .After take some

take 改为taking

7,medicine he was getting better. He asked me that we

that 改为 if 或 wether ，表疑问，问我们喜不喜欢代客老师

8,liked the teacher who took place .When he heard

这句你确认没打错？前半句没错，“When he heard”让人摸不到头脑。hear是及物动词没有宾语，这是个问题，when应该引导从句，这连半句话没有，更别提主句了，有缺失，两处都有问题啊

9,Finally l asked him don't to worry about the work

don't 改为 not，让某人不要做某事，是 ask sb. not to do sth.

10,And have a good rest

这句没错，如果and 不应该大写不算的话。