Question

帮忙做高一英语短文改错,谢谢。

Having read your ad in the newspaper,I feel I'm fit the job,so I'm writing to apply for that.I'm a 21-year-old girl,1.68 meters tall.As a graduate from Chengdu Huaxi Travel School,I spoke not only standard Putonghua,but also excellent English.I got the first place in English competition last year.I was also the winner of a computer contest.Interested in Chinese history,geography or culture,I have read a lot of about them,particular those of Chengdu.So I konw its places of interest like the back of your hand.In addition to,I worked part-time as a guide for one year when at school.Giving the job,I'm sure to make a good guide.My telephone number is 8432161.Hope to hear from you soon.
要求改十处。再帮忙看看好吗?

Answer 1

1. 第1行 fit -> fit for 适合的
2. 第2行 Travel School -> Tourist School 旅游学校
3. 第3行 spoke -> speak 现在一般时即可,表示现在的情况
4. 第4行 in English competition -> in the English competition 特指加定冠词
5. 第5行 a lot of -> a lot 后面没有跟名词,用a lot即可
(第6行 konw是拼写输入错吧 know)
6. 第7行 In addition to -> In addition (不要to)
7. 第7行 worked -> had worked (后面有for one year,前面要用完成时,用过去完成时)
8. 第7行 when at school -> when I was at school, 要么at school (不能说when at school)
9. 第7行 Giving -> Given (job被给予,用过去分词)
10. 第8行 make -> be / become (make 让做, 要说成为用be/become)

Answer 2

第一行：fit--fit for（be fit for a job适合某项工作）；
第二行：apply for that--apply for it（it指代前面提到的同一事物）；
spoke--speak（指现在，用现在时）
第三行: in English competition--in the English competition（特指去年的英语竞赛，用定冠词）
第五行：or--and（肯定句列举事物，用and连接；否定句用or）；a lot of--a lot（后面没有宾语，不加介词of）
第六行：particular--particularly（尤其，副词）；konw--know(拼写错误)；the back of your hand--the back of my hand（了如指掌）；
第七行:In addition to--In addition（后面没有宾语，不加介词to）；
Giving--Given（被给予这份工作，用过去分词表被动）
<如果konw不是您笔误而是原文错误，非要找十处错误的话，把第三行的那个错误去掉就可以了>

Answer 3

我认为原文不是这个格式吧？发现有的一行不止一个错误呢

第一行 I feel I'm fit 加for the job,so
第二行 apply for that 改为it
第三行 I 现在时态speak
第五行 I was改为 am also
第七行 geography or改为and culture

I have read a lot后面去掉of

第八行 particularly
第九行like the back of your hand应该是like the back of my hand 了如指掌

In addition，后面没有宾语了，所以去掉to

第十行 Giving 改为 Given，意思相当于If I am given the job