Question

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Tom play computer very good! He play it everyday. He type is very fast. And he can know some information very fast before other people. The important is he can find a good job with computer. That means he has more luck than some people they can’t play computer well.
Play computer very well has some disadvantage too. It can affect to our course. If we play computer very long, our eyes can very tired. And on the Internet has some bad things. It can damage our healthy. And some students can be addicted to play computer games.
就是这篇，请在错误的答案的后面打上括号把正确的写在括号里。谢谢
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Answer 1

Tom play（plays) computer (+games) very good(well)! He play(plays) it everyday(every day 中间有空格). He type (types) is (去掉） very fast. And he can know some information very fast before other people.(整句：And he learns it faster than other people.) The important(importance) is (that) he can find a good job with computer(the knowledge of computer) . That means he has more luck than some people they(who) can’t play computer well.
Play(playing) computer(+games) very well has some disadvantage too. It can affect to(去掉) our course. If we play computer very(too) long, our eyes can (feel) very tired. And on the Internet has some bad things.(整句：And there is some bad things on the Internet.) It can damage our healthy(health). And some students can be addicted to play（in playing) computer games.

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要补充单词的括号里有 +

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Answer 2

Tom play（plays） computer very good（well）! He play（plays） it everyday. He（His） type is very fast. And he can know some information very fast before（前面三词faster than） other people. The important（加上thing） is he can find a good job with computer. That means he has more luck than some（other） people （加上is （that））they can’t play computer well.
Play（Playing） computer very well has some disadvantage（disadvantages） too. It can affect to our course. If we play computer very long, our eyes can（will be） very tired. And on the Internet has some bad things. It can damage our healthy（health）. And some students can be addicted to play（playing） computer games. 这篇文章不怎么通顺

Answer 3

Tom play（plays) computer very good(well)! He play(plays) it everyday(every day). He type (types) very fast. And he can know some information very fast before other people。 The important(important thing) is that he can find a good job with computer(computer skills),which means he has more luck than some people they(who) can’t play computer well.
Play(Playing) computer very well has some disadvantage(disadvantages) too. It can(will) affect (to去掉) our course(courses). If we play computer very(too) long, our eyes can (can be) very tired. And the Internet has some bad things (on it)It can damage our healthy(health). And some students can be addicted to computer games.