Question

求英语高手帮忙改一下这篇英语六级作文，满分20分哦,请评分。

近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象;
出现这种现象的原因;
针对这种现象,我认为.
In recent years,there is a phenomenon between students that many students are putting less attention on learning chinese.It is common to see many students to get more grades in english than chinese in their test.
I think there are some reasons which can contribute to this phenomenon. One hand,with the development of society and opening up to the outside world,all kinds of foreign ideas and cultures are flocking ,which makes us more interested in foreign things and foreign language,so that students ignore chinese learning in this situation.The other hand,school education that pay more attention to english.Of course,it is more diffcult for students to learn a foreign language that they haven't use it very very well comparison with a language that they can master it even though they don't learn it.
As far as i am concerned,chinese have long history and we konw it just a little.We can't disregard chinese not only we are chinese but chinese is our national culture and we should protect it forever.

Answer 1

近年来，在学生之间有一种常见的现象，那就是许多学生较少关注中文学习。一种普遍的现象表明许多学生在英语测试中比在中文测试中获得更多的成绩。
我认为有几个原因导致这种现象。一方面，随着社会的发展和对外开放，各种外来思想文化传播，这使得我们对外国的东西和外国语言感兴趣，在这种现状下导致学生忽略了中文学习。另一方面，学校教学把更多精力放在英语上。当然，对于学生们而言，学习一门不熟练的外语比学习一门熟悉的语言更困难，即使这门熟悉的语言他们不去学习。
就我而言，中国有悠久的历史，我们知道的只是一点点。我们不能无视中文，这不仅是因为我们是中国人，而且中文是我们的民族文化，我们应该永远保护它

Answer 2

语句基本通顺、流畅，符合题目要求，能够熟练运用复合句。
但是有部分语法错误，基础知识不够牢固！
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