Question

请帮我看看这篇英语作文是否有语法的错误，如有请指出，谢谢

My Favourite Festival
My favourite festival is Mid-Autumn Fesitival.It usually comes in August or September.On that day,I often have a big dinner with my family members.After dinner ,we go out to watch the moon.Sometimes we use a telescope to watchu it .On that day,we are not only watch the moon but have barbecue as well.I really enjoy myself at Mid-Autumn Festival.

Answer 1

一般说 Mid-Autumn Day ,而不是用festival，而且你的festival打错了~~~

telescope虽然是直望远镜，但一般是指单筒望远镜，我们常用的是双筒望远镜 binoculars

On that day,we are not only watch the moon but have barbecue as well

这句里面，we are 去掉are

have a barbecue