Question

求英语大神解答一下！

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Smith
I’m Li Hua from your class last year. There will be an English film review completion going on held by the school and I wish to participate in it. Participants need to watch specific English films and write a review for the film.
I like watching films and writing film reviews very much. However my English is not the best and I struggle a bit writing one in English, especially for the vocabularies needed to describe a film. If you have time, could you arrange a consultation for me so I can show you my work and get some advice?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 2

I’m Li Hua from your class last year. There will be an English film review completion going on held by the school and I wish to participate in it. Participants need to watch specific English films and write a review for the film.
I like watching films and writing film reviews very much. However my English is not the best and I struggle a bit writing one in English, especially for the vocabularies needed to describe a film. If you have time, could you arrange a consultation for me so I can show you my work and get some advice?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 3

To ：Dear Mr.Smith ,
There will be an English movie appraisal activity in our school .
The activity will help us a lot in our English study , and I want to take part in it .But it is the first time for me ,so I am not self cofident in writting it well .
You are my English teacher and have rich expetience in English teaching .
I am willing to get your guidance in writting the paper ,and I hope you to save time for me and give me some advice .
I hope you have a pleasant work time and give me a rapid reply .
Thank you !
Your student ,Lihua .
7,October,2021.

Answer 4

打字不易，希望好评。
Dear Mr. Smith,

Facing a tough problem of how to make a film rev iew, | am writing to ask you for a favour.

Next month, our school is going to have an Englis h film review competition, where competitors are supp osed to comment on a certain English film. | intend to participate in it, but | have no clear knowledge of how to make a film review, like what aspects should be inv olved. | was wondering if you could give me a brief ex planation and recommend me some relevant books a nd articles.

Your early reply will be highly appreciated.

Yours,

Li Hua

追问

我要原创。不是标准答案