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Last weekend, I(enjoyed) a wonderful trip to Nansha with my family. We set (off) at 9:00 a.m.and arrived at 10 a.m. When we got there, we could not wait to (attend) theexhibition of sand statues, which (was) hosted by the local government ofNansha. The statues were (amazing) and fantastic, with the largest one as highas 7 (meters). Then, we had delicious seafood for lunch, (and) after that wewent to watch (the) birds in the Nansha Wetland Park. It is really pleasant andunforgettable, and I am a little worried (about) that too (many) tourists maydestroy the environment of Nansha.
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倒数第二行,and 应该为but,不用加about

倒数第三行,watch out birds 应该把 out 去掉
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