Question

下面的英语句子有没有错误？

china endeavors to increase its grain production so that its self-sufficiency rate of grain under normal conditions will be above 95% and net import rate will not exceed 5% domestic consumption
中国将努力促进粮食增产，确保在正常情况下粮食自给率不低于95％，净进口量不超过国内消费量的5％。

Answer 1

国内消费量的5％。5% of the domestic consumption。原文是直接翻译，作如上改动。

Answer 2

可以的，后半部分可以改一下：
... above 95%, and the net import rate will not exceed 5% of its domestic consumption.

Answer 3

没有任何错误，翻译得已经很不错了。

Answer 4

China开头的c要大写，这是个专有名词。

Answer 5

China首字母大写