Question

英文高手帮帮忙

求高手帮忙把下面这段中文翻译成英文，因为我要去面试，机器软件翻译不准确，还望高手们帮帮我，机器译的就不要COPY了，谢谢。
内容：（各位老师早上好，我先作一下自我介绍，我叫张娴，来自贵州安顺，今年23岁，我喜欢唱歌，跳舞，我还是一个爱学习的女孩，我最喜欢学习英语，一直想渴望有一个浓厚气氛的英语学习环境，能来到贵州师范大学一直是我的理想，我希望老师能让我留下了，让我能实现我的理想，我的人生格言是：努力学习，创造美好明天，谢谢。）

Answer 1

good morning,revent teacher,may i do a self-introduction,my name is zhangxian,i'm a 23 years old girl come from anxun guizhou,my interests include dancing,singing and beside i'm also a girl drew into studing,i was so much yearning for a place that have a good study atomsphere and i found it in guizhou normal university,so i'm dreaming for this wonderful school,and i much hope that i can get this opportunity, thank you for considering.

Answer 2

Good morning, everyone. Let me introduce myself first. My name is Zhang Xian , from An Shun, Guizhou province.I'm 23 years old. I like singing and dancing. Besides, I'm a girl who loves studying. I like learing English most. I have been desiring for a thick atmoshpere of English learning. Studying in Guizhou Normal University is always my ideal. I heartfully hope you could make me stay to realize my dream. My motto is: Study hard, Create better tomorrow. Thank you.