Question

English is a language which needs your heart to be keen on if u want learn it well. 这句话有语法错

English is a language which needs your heart to be keen on if you want to learn it well.
重新更正一下，上面的句子中的定语从句用法用错误码

Answer 1

How to Learn English Well？
Some people think that if we want to learn English well we must learn English grammar well first of all. Others believe we can't learn English well unless we keep in mind as many English words and phrases as possible.
In my opinion， grammar rules， new words and phrases are very important， but they are not enough. Fox example， some of my classmates are quite good at grammar and have learned by heart a lot of English words and phrases， yet they can't express themselves in English when they meet foreign friends.
The best way to learn English well， I think， is to learn and use English all the time. Don't be afraid of being laughed at. We'd better do a lot of listening， speaking， reading and writing. If you can form the habit of thinking and writing in English all day， you are sure to grasp the spirit of English and will be able to read works in English within a short period of time.

Answer 2

want to learn

Answer 3

OK
只是有点累赘

语法没错

Answer 4

English is a language which you need to keen on if you want to learn it well.

Answer 5

I would like to make this sentence shorter and clearer.

Loving English is the bottom line for you to excel in it.