帮我批改一下这篇英语作文,谢谢🙏 50
Hello , everyone! I am honored to have a speech here, which is about protecting wild animals. 开头的单词写错了,用 have a speech 更符合国外的语言习惯,deliver 一般指交付传送什么东西。
Why it decreases so fast? The main reason is because of the human's activity. Humans
destroy the forest and their habitat. That make them become endangered animals.
It is high time that we take some actions to change this situation. I call on everyone: It's our duty to protect the environment. We should be the forest guards, not forest killer. Only in this way, we will create a peaceful and friendly homeland.
Thank you for listening.