Question

中翻英下面这句话，谢谢。

非常高兴我能收到conditional offer，我看到条件之一是在6月一日之前提交语言成绩，但我想问，有没有可能可以推迟一下提交日期，比如说6月下旬？学校是我的dream school，我只申请了你们，所以我非常珍惜这个机会，但我有些担忧我不能及时提交语言成绩，所以询问是否有可能可以晚一点提交？

Answer 1

I am ecstatic(或者用so excited也OK) to receive the conditional offer. (学校名称) is my dream school and the only school that I applied to, so I really appreciate this opportunity. However, I am concerned that I may not be able to submit my language test results (这里说明是TOEFL还是雅思还是什么的会比较好) on time because (这里说明具体原因，是因为考试考的太晚还是有什么别的原因延迟了？). So I am wondering if I could get an extension and send it in after the June 1st deadline, maybe in late June?

I am very pleased 这个句型最好不要随便用，这个语气比较居高临下，通常用于说话者身份比较高（至少高于对方）的情况下，I am glad 好一点但也多少有这方面的问题，I am honored倒是可以但是稍微有点太过（一般用于获奖感言），It is my pleasure后面一般都跟着meet you，I am so happy挺好的，但个人偏向用意思相同的excited。

conditional offer的话就要注意满足学校的那些条件了（好吧这句是废话），总之加油吧~ 祝你好运！

Answer 2

非常高兴我能收到conditional offer，我看到条件之一是在6月一日之前提交语言成绩，但我想问，有没有可能可以推迟一下提交日期，比如说6月下旬？学校是我的dream school，我只申请了你们，所以我非常珍惜这个机会，但我有些担忧我不能及时提交语言成绩，所以询问是否有可能可以晚一点提交？

I'm very glad to receive a conditional offer, I saw one of the conditions is submitted before June 1, language result, but I want to ask, is it possible to delay the delivery date, for example in late June? School is my dream school, I only applied for you, so I really cherish this opportunity, but I have some worry, I can not timely submitted language achievement, so to ask if it is possible to submit a little later?

Answer 3

It is my pleasure to be given a conditional offer. I am aware that one of the conditions include the submission of the language result before 1 June 2015. I was wondering whether there is a possibility to extent this deadline to a later date, such as towards the end of June? I has always been my sole wish to be admitted by (学校全名), thus I apply to (学校全名) in the hope that my dream might come true. Therefore, I was truly fortunate to be given this offer. Yet, please understand my concern that on the off chance, my language result may not be submitted in accordance to the deadline. Hence, I humbly ask for your consideration in extending the deadline. Thank you very much for your time.

Answer 4

Thank you very much for your kindly offer. My pleasure to get this conditional(?) offe(r)(?确定不错?). Since it is requried to provide language certification, while my certification is still on processing , I am wondering if you may kindly prolong the submission deadline to for me , end of June for example,concerning this special reason of mine. Your university is the only one that I have applied for, to be a student of this respective university is really to fulfile my dream. Please help me with this first step of my dream.

All the best
with great regards

Answer 5

I appreciate receiving the conditional offer from your side, it seems that the language certificate should be submitted before 1st June, I wonder if I can provide later, says: within the last ten-day of a month, this school is my dream school, so I apply for it, of course, I cherish this opportunity very much. Currently what annoying me is on time certificate submitted.

Please tell If I can submit it later. Thank you!