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高手帮我看看这篇文章的用词错误、语法错误以及结构错误。谢了

Today, more and more people prefer to select leaving the big-city or super-city, however, the administration face to these selection that they often enmesh complex and intractable condition how control city’s demand, for example shortage of housing.

Many economist consider that the problem of shortage of housing in big city must give the market. In other words, acrossing to the house’s value control people enter big city. ‘Let market decide the price in big-city’ says kennetth Manton, City Developing Study Centre Of Duke University in North Caroline. He says ‘every city resource are only limited resource, so to increasing these resource’s price control people entry big-city accordingly to resolve city’s resource, such as shortage of housing.

However, a survey of Cambridge University reveals the estate of big-city or super-city and this survey include a hundred big-city or super-city of the global. This survey reveals in the big-city have big main estate. The High-salary($300,000) and low-wage($10,000) mere occupy respectively approximately 20 percent in the big-city, surplus are mid-salary($50,000-12,000). But, this survey show a interesting phenomena that about 80 percent people complain shortage of housing in the big-city. Says the Dr. Bojian Hu of the Cambridge University. He says ‘if you are $300,000 per year, you may buy any a house in the any big-city, but if you are $10,000 per year you can not buy any house. However, for the estate of mid-salary buy a house would them become a poor. But any big-city main estate are mid-salary. So our government must resolve mid-salary’s demand of the housing.

In my view, the government must increase price of the extravagance-house how control entry big-city high-salary. And to decline price of the general house that satisfy the demand of house of
mid-salary. While government must provide more cheap-hire house to the low-wage.

请解答时，把详细的错误及改过的给贴出来。谢了。我会在采纳时再给50分的悬赏分的。
这篇文章首先不是通过翻译机器翻译出来的，这是篇小作文。其次希望大虾帮我一句句的改一下，哪个错误给指出来，只有这样我才能进步呢。就是麻烦大虾像这样改一下，http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/189644506.html
对您的帮助我深表感谢。

Answer 1

Today, more and more people prefer to select leaving the big-city or super-city, however, the administration face to these selection that they often enmesh complex and intractable condition how control city’s demand, for example shortage of housing.

修改后: Nowadays, more and more people prefer to leave big-cities or mage-cities. Therefore, the administration enmeshes a complex and intractable condition of how to meet the needs of his people, for example shortage of housing. (解释：prefer to已含有选择的意义，select显得有些重复了，后面的大城市或特大城市是泛指，故没有必要加定冠词the)

Many economist consider that the problem of shortage of housing in big city must give the market. In other words, acrossing to the house’s value control people enter big city. ‘Let market decide the price in big-city’ says kennetth Manton, City Developing Study Centre Of Duke University in North Caroline. He says ‘every city resource are only limited resource, so to increasing these resource’s price control people entry big-city accordingly to resolve city’s resource, such as shortage of housing.

修改后: Many economists consider that the problem of shortage of houses in big city must give play to the regulatory role of the market. In other words, we should control the number of people entering big cities according to the house’s value. ‘Let market decide the price in big-city’ says kennetth Manton, from City Developing Study Centre of Duke University. He says ‘every city’s resources are limited, only when we increase this resource’s price and control people entry big-cities accordingly can we resolve city’s resources, such as shortage of houses.”

However, a survey of Cambridge University reveals the estate of big-city or super-city and this survey include a hundred big-city or super-city of the global. This survey reveals in the big-city have big main estate. The High-salary($300,000) and low-wage($10,000) mere occupy respectively approximately 20 percent in the big-city, surplus are mid-salary($50,000-12,000). But, this survey show a interesting phenomena that about 80 percent people complain shortage of housing in the big-city. Says the Dr. Bojian Hu of the Cambridge University. He says ‘if you are $300,000 per year, you may buy any a house in the any big-city, but if you are $10,000 per year you can not buy any house. However, for the estate of mid-salary buy a house would them become a poor. But any big-city main estate are mid-salary. So our government must resolve mid-salary’s demand of the housing.

修改后: However, a survey of Cambridge University, which investigate hundreds big-cities and mage-cities all over the world, reveals that these cities have big main estates. This survey reveals in. The High-salary ($300,000) and low-wage ($10,000) mere occupy respectively, approximately 20 percent while the mid-salary ($50,000-12,000) occupies surplus. However, this survey also shows us an interesting phenomenon that about 80 percent people complaining shortage of housing. Dr. Bojian Hu of the Cambridge University says ‘if you have an income of $300,000 per year, you may buy any house in any big-city, but if you have an income of $10,000 per year you can not buy any house, for buying a house would make the mid-salary become poor. Since the main estates in most big-cities are mid-salary. So our government must resolve the problem of the mid-salary’s demand of the houses.

In my view, the government must increase price of the extravagance-house how control entry big-city high-salary. And to decline price of the general house that satisfy the demand of house of
mid-salary. While government must provide more cheap-hire house to the low-wage.

修改后: In my view, the government must the following three aspects. The first one is to increase the price of the extravagance houses in order to control the possession of the high-salary; the second one is to decline the price of the general houses that satisfy the demand of the mid-salary; and the third one is to provide more cheap-hire houses to the low-wage.

你写的这篇文章错的地方太零碎了，本来想要一句句改的，但这样看起来会很乱，所以我帮你一段段改啦，希望会被你采纳，O(∩_∩)O哈！

Answer 2

Today, more and more people prefer living in big or metropolitan areas. However, such kind of selection gives great burden to the administration (government) that they are often enmeshed in a web of complex and intractable conditions. One example is how to control the serious problem of shortage of housing.

Many economists consider that the problem of shortage of housing in the big cities should be solved by the market itself. In other words, the housing price will affect people’s entry the big city. “Let market decide the housing price in the big city,”said Kennetth Manto, who is from the City Developing Study Center of Duke University in North Caroline. He also pointed out, “The resources in every city are limited, so the increasing price of the resources will surely affect people’s entry big cities. (不用entry into，entry此处及物) As a result, the shortage of housing will be solved accordingly.

A survey of Cambridge University reflecting the real estate in metropolitan areas includes a hundred big cities around the world. The survey tells us that the high-salary($300,000) and low-wage($10,000) merely occupy respectively approximately 20 percent in the big city, and the remaining 60% is occupied by the middium-salary($50,000-12,000). What is interesting is that about 80% of people complain about shortage of houses in the big city, said the Dr. Bojian Hu of the Cambridge University. He also pointed out, “If you earn $300,000 per year, you may buy any house you want in any big city. But if you earn $10,000 per year you cannot buy any house.” However, if the middium-salary buy a house, they would become the poor ones. Since most of the houses in the big city belong to the middium-salary, the government should take proper measurements to solve the middium-salary’s great demand for the houses.

In my view, the government must increase the price of the extravagant houses which may control the entry of the high-salary group in the big city. On the other hand, the government should decrease the price of the general houses that will satisfy the demand of the middium-salary group.

你的文章完全是机器翻译的，我按照我的理解重写了，几乎每句话都有点改动。你的原文几乎没有什么大的价值，这是实话。
我的仅供参考。

Answer 3

Today, more and more people prefer to live in huge cities or metropolitan areas, however, these caused great challenges to housing administration officers, as they must device complex and intractable seletion criterias to satisfy the high demand for city life, resulting in problems such as housing shortages.

Many economists consider housing shortages in metropolitan areas as a way to motivate the market for real estate and construction companies. In other words, the price for housing is a major factor affecting the number of people living in metropolitan areas.

Answer 4

修改后：

Today, more and more people prefer to live in huge cities or metropolitan areas, however, these caused great challenges to housing administration officers, as they must device complex and intractable seletion criterias to satisfy the high demand for city life, resulting in problems such as housing shortages.

Many economists consider housing shortages in metropolitan areas as a way to motivate the market for real estate and construction companies. In other words, the price for housing is a major factor affecting the number of people living in metropolitan areas."Let the market decide the housing price in big cities" says Kennetth Manton from City Developing Study Centre Of Duke University in North Caroline. He also says that every city resource is a limited resource, so by increasing their prices, we can control the amount of people living in metropolian cities as well as resolving shortages in housing.

However, a survey conducted by Cambridge University including over one hundred major cities or metropolian areas around the globe, in regard to the real estate market there reveals that people with a high annual salary($300,000) or a low-wage($10,000) only occupy 20% of the available housing facillities with the reast being people with an average annual salary of $50,000-12,000. Also, this survey exposes an interesting phenomena, that about 80% of the people surveyed complain of housing shortages in major cities and metropolitan areas, as pointed out by Dr. Bojian Hu from Cambridge University. He says, "if you earn $300,000 per year, you can buy any house in any city, but if you earn $10,000 per year, you cannot buy any house in the surveyed cities. Most house buyers in metropolitan areas are people with an average annual salary who spent most of their savings on mortages. Therfore in order to resolve the housing crisis, our government need to satisfy the demands of people earning mid-salaries.

In my opinion, the government must increase prices for expensive housing as a way to control the amount of high earning people entering major cities, as well as providing for mid-salary earners as well as cheaper housing for low-wage earners.

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Answer 5

苦恼，没法改啊，基本读不懂。