Question

求翻译成全英文？

我知道您是一个尽职优秀的老师，您也有您的苦衷
and 您的一句话、一个小小的举动，就可能可以改变我们一生的命运
不过俄觉得学校就应该是一个让学生能快乐学习的地方

如果觉得压力怎么学习呢 见多识广的您说是吧？
您现在这需要给我一张纸 然后签上名字 就可以让一个学生找到希望 您怎么会吝啬这小小的举手之劳呢

我的翻译：
I know you're a dedicated and outstanding conselor，and every piece of words you said， even a small action，would affect one's whole life.
and i think school is supposed to be a place which can make student for studying successfully ，but，if it is stressed,how can we study? right?
And now, the only thing you can do is .....

(谁能帮忙完善下英文部分？？)

Answer 1

and i think school is supposed to be a place which can make student for studying successfully ，but，if it is stressed,how can we study? right?

改一下
and I think school is supposed to be a place where can make students study happily and successfully. Yet I'm too stressed to study anything. Man as wise and knowledgeable as you would understand, right? Now, all you need to do is to give me a piece of paper and sign your name on it. Action as simple as that would give a student hope. How could you not be generous with such a small favor?

纯手打，望采纳喔亲~~

追问

谢谢大神的翻译哦，你英语不错哈！不过可以帮俄看看这句话是对的吗I know you're a dedicated and outstanding conselor，and every piece of words you said， even a small action，would affect one's whole life.
还有大神翻译的那一段可以稍微口语些嘛？我明天要用呢

追答

你这句可以 除了
piece of words直接省略成word吧 读起来有点怪怪的
= =我觉得蛮简单了，再简化，一短句一短句的就不好了

追问

可是I know you're a dedicated and outstanding conselor，and every word you said， even a small action，would affect one's whole life.这样直翻好像不符合西方人的语言习惯啊（特别是even a small action的action）对这个你有什么好主意吗？

追答

..and every word you said, every action you take, no matter how small it is, would influence one's entire life
改成这样你觉得怎样

Answer 2

I know you're a dedicated and outstanding teacher, and have good willings to teach us.Every piece of words,even a small action
by you，would affect a student's life.

I think school a place in which student can enjoy themselves, broaden their eyes and study, but not
overstressed,do you agree with me ?

Could you please help me to give a signature for me, it will of great help to my life, thanks in advance.

追问

他好像不是teacher他是counselor

追答

个人觉得应该是teacher