Question

麻烦帮我修改一下英文个人简历 急急急 在线等！！

First thank you for giving me an opportunity totake apart in this interview.Than I will make a brief self introduction.
I will graduate from Tianjin ForeignLanguage University and get my master’s degree at March
ThanI will introduce the reason I am qualified in this position.

First,as I can speak both Korean and English fluently, so I can deal with customers from foreigncountries. I will got the information from them and provide them best service.

Answer 1

第二句说：
Then I would like to make a Brief self-Introduction . 会感觉好些
月份前面的介词是 in March
而且你一直重复使用then I will 这样的用法，太多了会有审美疲劳

Answer 2

Than 改为then
最后一段got 改为get
最后一段Best 前加the
你还没写完吧
我先修改这么多。
望采纳！！！

Answer 3

有一些拼写上的错误，

First, thank you for giving me the opportunity to take part in this interview. Now, I will introduce myself briefly.

I will graduate from Tianjin Foreign Language University and get my master deree in March this year.

I think I am qualified for this position, because of following points:

First, as I can speak both orean and English fluently, I can deal with customers who can speak English or Korean. I can get the information from them and provide best service to them.