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The different eating habit between Chinese and American

This week I talked with a MIT student about the different eating habit between Chinese and American. From three aspects, what is American food and Chinese food, different kind of restaurant, and what time Chinese and American eat.
题目和第一段的主要错误有：冠词、名词单复数、第二句的句子结构。第二句是一个很长的名词词组，不是句子。作为文章的主题句，不能这样用。

The first part we talked about what is Chinese and American food. She asked me what is American food in my mind, I said junk food, chicken and beef. Then, she gave me some photos let me guess the name of the food on these photos. She provided me typical American food, like steak, fried chicken, and hamburger. Meanwhile, she asked me some famous Chinese food in America, I told her those food couldn’t represent Chinese food. For example, she show me a picture that a course named orange chicken. I said that was not a Chinese food, but she told me lot of Chinese restaurant made it as a traditional Chinese food.
这段的主要问题有句子结构、连刀句(run-together)、一句话两个动词，单复数、时态等。

The next part we exchange our idea about different kind of restaurant. I shared my experience with her. I told her in this summer I went to Washington DC, and one day I ate lunch at a restaurant only 5 dollars, but another day I went to a museum I just buy a hot dog and a cola, I paid 30 dollars! She said that was usual in America, cause the different restaurant price range from 4$ - 600$. And I told her in china, the wine was very expensive.
这段的问题还是单复数、连刀句、时态，大小写、用此错误等。

The last part we shared what time we eat breakfast, lunch, and dinner. When I told her I eat breakfast at 6:30 am every week day, she was surprised. She said American students have breakfast at 10:00 am I was surprised either. But in my opinion, have breakfast too late is not a good way to keep healthy.

I will talk with her more about eating habit between Chinese and American, and also I think that is a good chance to learn more about America culture, it is very helpful to me.

Answer 1

The different habits of eating between Chinese and American.

This week I talked to a student from M.I.T. about the different habits of eating. We talked about those three ideas: the main point of American food and Chinese food, the differences from sorts of restaurants, and what time Chinese and American they eat.

The first part we talked about what Chinese and American food is. She asked me what American food is in my mind, I said junk food, chicken and beef. Then, she gave me some photos and let me guess the name of the food from these photos. She provided me some typical American food, like steak, fried chicken, and hamburger. Meanwhile, she asked me about some famous Chinese food in America, I told her those food couldn’t represent Chinese food. For example, she showed me a picture with a course named orange chicken. I said that was not a Chinese food, but she told me that lots of Chinese restaurants make it as a case of traditional Chinese food.

The next part we exchanged our idea about different kinds of restaurants. I shared my experience with her. I told her in this summer I went to Washington D.C.. One day I ate lunch at a restaurant for only 5 dollars, but another day I went to a museum, I just bought a slide of hot dog and a cup of coke cost me 30 dollars! She said that was usual in America because the different restaurants' prices range from 4 dollars to 600 dollars. (And I told her in China, the wine was very expensive.其实这句最好不要，与整段没什么联系)

The last part we shared the time that we eat breakfast, lunch, and dinner. When I told her that I eat breakfast at 6:30 a.m. every work day, she was surprised. She said American students have breakfast at 10:00 a.m. and I was as suprised as she was. But in my opinion, to have breakfast too late is not a good way to keep healthy.

Besides of those above I have shared with her, I decided that I will share with her more about habits of eating between Chinese and American. Otherwise I think that is a good chance to learn more about America culture which is very helpful for me.