2018-02-14
Dear jane
Glad to receive your letter. However ,i'm terribly
sorry to hear you don't do good (good 改成 well 解析:固定词组) in maths
and have lost interest with(with 改成 in 解析:固定词组) schoolwork.
In my opinions (opinions 改成 opinion 解析:固定词组),
maths is difficult for many students,
so there was (was 改成 is 解析:时态错误) no need to feel too bad.
At this moment, yous should cheer up and find ways to reduce your anxiety.
Why not to go on an outing with your friends or listening (listening 改成 listen
解析:与go on并列动词,所以是listen.) to your favorite music?
You can talk with the teachers you trust most,
but(but 改成 and 解析:非转折,而是并列关系) they may give you some advice
that can help you to improve.
Probable (Probable 改成 Probably 解析:副词作猜测,有可能) ,
it's time for you to
explore ^(此处加 a 解析:一种方法)new learning method.
Anyway, hope you can rebuild our (our 改成 your 解析:第二人称)
self-confidence soon!
取材于道客巴巴。
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