Question

高一英语改错

My mother worked like a doctor in our small town and she had always been busy.I remember that when I was still a child,Mother was so busy as she had no much time to take care of me.Inthe past I hated her very much,but I come to realizing how important her work is to others."Dear Mother,"I wrote,"I am very proud of having so a great mother. I believe in that you love me though you've never said so."

Answer 1

she had always been busy改成she was always busy。and前后时态要统一。
Mother was so busy as she had no much time to take care of me中的as改成that。so...that...如此……以致
In the past 加time
but I come to realizing 改成but I've come to realize。前面，强调对现在的影响，用现在进行时。后面，to接动词原形。
so a great mother改成such a great mother。名词前面用such。
I believe in that you love me though you've never said so。去掉in，believe in表示宗教上的信仰，或表示信念。

Answer 2

第二行的as改成that;第四行的so 改为such,believe in 中的in去掉