Question

哪位英语好的同学给我写个英文的自我介绍啊~面试用的：

大致内容如下
您好，我是XXX,2003年毕业于XX商业大学，我学的专业是市场营销。 我的家乡是XX市 ,来天津学习生活X年了。我之前的有过两段工作经历，做过低压电器产品的系统集成和钢材销售。我个性偏外向，业余时间喜欢踢足球，读书。我个人的优点是踏实，勤奋，有责任心；缺点是（...随便说点无关紧要的）。我觉得我能胜任这份工作的原因是：我有过3年相同的工作经历，对天津地区市场比较了解；我主观上也非常想抓住这次机会。我相信在我不断的努力下，会很快融入公司，并且会成为一个优秀的员工，我更相信，在我们大家的团结协作下，XXX的明天会更美好！谢谢!
别用翻译软件骗人啊，要人工的，最好再给我加点东西就感激不尽了，我会再追加20分

Answer 1

Hello, I'm XXX, i was graduated from XX commercial college in 2003, my major is marketing. My hometown is XX city, i came to tianjin for study X years. I have two segments before work experience,i had done low-voltage products of system integration and steel sales. My individuality partial is extroversion, in spare time i like playing football,and reading books. My personal advantage is steadfast, diligence, have responsibility, Defect is i usually too pursue the perfection. I think I can do this job,here is the reason: I have three years work experience, tianjin region market is understanding by me; I subjectively is eager to grasp this opportunity. I believe in my constant efforts, i will quickly integrate into the company, and will become an excellent employee, I prefer to believe, by all of our unity cooperation, XXX's future will be more beautiful! Thank you!
in the end,I sincerely hope you could give me an opportunity to make my dream come true.

纯手打，忘给分，谢谢。
当年我最后一句就是这么写的，就被录用了

Answer 2

说实在的这样的resume你得去花钱买的，网上在高分要来的很多都是C+C C+V
所以还是去买一份吧不贵的！

Answer 3

Hello, I am XXX, 2003, graduated from the University XX Commercial, My major is marketing. My home is XX City, to study life in Tianjin X years. I have had two previous work experience, done low-voltage electrical products, systems integration and steel sales. Outgoing side of my personality, like his spare time playing football, reading. My personal advantage is practical, hard-working, responsible; disadvantage is that (point does not matter ... just saying.) I think I can do the job because: I had the same 3 years work experience, a better understanding of the market in Tianjin; I also very much like the subjective seize this opportunity. I believe that my continued efforts, will soon integrate into the company, and it will be a good employee, I believe, in collaboration with the unity of us all, XXX tomorrow better! Thank you!

Answer 4

Hello, I'm XXX, 2003, graduated from XX commercial college my major is marketing. My hometown is XX city of tianjin, to study life X years. I have two segments before work experience, have done low-voltage products of system integration and steel sales. My individuality partial extroversion, the spare time like playing football, reading books. My personal advantage is steadfast, diligence, there is responsibility, Defect is (... say casually point irrelevant). I think I can do this job is the reason: I have three years of work experience, same in tianjin region market is understanding; I subjectively is eager to grasp this opportunity. I believe in my constant efforts, will quickly integrate into the company, and will become an excellent employees, I prefer to believe, in all of our unity, cooperation, XXX's future will be more beautiful! Thank you!