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I'm very glad to receive your email .Now I’d like to tell you my plans to the summer holidays .First, I’ll take seven—day trip to Dalian. You know that I have ever been there up to now. Second, I will take a summer course to learn how to dance as soon as I will come back from Dalian, which will be of great help for me to keep fit and making friends. Third, I’m determining to spare no effort to help the children in your neighborhood with their English. But my neighbors hope I can give their children some advices on how to learn English.
What about your summer holiday plans? Looking forward to hear from you soon.
跪求！谢谢！

Answer 1

【解答】I'm very glad to receive your email .Now I’d like to tell you my plans to the summer holidays .First, I’ll take【添加a 】seven—day trip to Dalian. You know that I have 【ever改成never】 been there up to now. Second, I will take a summer course to learn how to dance as soon as I 【删除will 】come back from Dalian, which will be【删除 of 】great【 help改成helpful】 for me to keep fit and【镇槐 making改成make】御雹友 friends. Third, I’m determining to spare no effort to help the children in【 your改成the】 neighborhood with their English. But my neighbors hope I can give their children some 【advices 改成advice】on how to learn English.
What about your summer holiday plans?【 Looking 改成Look】forward to 【hear改成hearing】 from you soon.
希望我给你的回答，对你的学习有帮助。祝你学习进步肆并、学习快乐。

Answer 2

seven—李罩day trip前面加 a
第二行ever 改为never
第三行as soon as后面的will去掉
第四行making改为哪卖闹make
最后一行配闷what改为how