Question

哪位英语高手帮我看个英语作为CET-6。。。万分感激

1、如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的应用，例如......
2、数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习、生活产生的影响。
The Digital Age
Nowadays,more and more digital products came into our life,we call the days with digital products the digital age.The digital products are full of our everyday life,such as digital TVs,computers,cameras,Mp3s...
There is no doubt that digital products have changed our life,we can't live without them.Computers give us a way to communiocate with others,buth also a window to look at the world,and the softwares are also indispensable which help us a lot at work.And the digital cameras,also bring us a lot of happiness.When we have a travel we take a camera with us so we can make every minute at hands.Photos are very important things we look back our lives when we are old.One thing we coundn't forget is the digital TV.I still believe that it is very nice when we watch TV with the ones we love.So I think whatever it will happen,we can't live without TVs.
The digital age,the colourfull life.

Answer 1

Nowadays,more and more digital products come into our life,we named the days with digital products the digital age.The digital products are full of our everyday life,such as digital TVs,computers,cameras,music players...
There is no doubt that digital products have changed our life,we can't live without them.Computers give us a new method to communiocate with others,and a window to look out of the world.the softwares are also indispensable in our works.And the digital cameras,also bring us a lot of happiness.When we have a travel we take a camera with us that we can make every minute in hands.Photos are very important for our looking back of lives when we are old.One thing we coundn't forget is the digital TV.I still believe that it is very nice when we watch TV with someone we love.So I think whatever it will happen,we can't live without TVs.
The digital age,the colourfull life.

改改可以，不过你这个六级作文的意识水平不高，估计得不到高分，顶多是四级的中等作文水平。像小学生作文啊。

Answer 2

Nowadays,more and more digital products are becoming part of our every day life, and we refer this new era as the information age where we became unseperateable from digital devices ,such as digital TVs,computers,cameras,Mp3s...
There is no doubt that digital products have changed our life,and we can't live without them.Computers and the internet not only provide us a way to communiocate with others,but also a window to look at the world。。。

好多错。。。敢了1/3 就不想改了，还不如重写

Answer 3

你究竟要我们做什么
现在社会真是很浮躁
甚至在做学问的时候
都会这么毛毛躁躁

Answer 4

数字时代
如今，越来越多的数字产品进入我们的生活，我们管拥有数字产品的日子叫做数字时代。数字产品充斥在我们的日常生活中，比如数字电视，计算机，数码相机，MP3等等。
毋庸置疑，数字产品改变了我们的生活，我们离不开它们。电脑给我们提供了一个与他人沟通的方式，一扇观察世界的窗户，无可替代的电脑软件在工作中给了我们很大的帮助。数码相机给我们带来了许多快乐。当我们带着数码相机旅行时，可以随手记录每一分钟。在我们变老的时候，照片是我们回忆人生的重要的东西。我们不能忘记的一件东西是数字电视，我始终认为当我们和心爱的人一起看电视是非常棒的事情。因此我想无论发生什么，我们都离不开电视。
数字时代，多彩人生。