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紧急求助大家：帮忙翻译一段英文信，谢谢了。

我想申请香港的研究生，想找老外给写一封推荐信，我该怎么写，我大概写了一个框架，帮忙翻译一下吧。如果你能帮我写出更好的来最好了

有3个多月没与老师联系了，开头句怎么写。

我大概写了一下正文：

我现在已在中国的一家担保公司工作。我刚刚了解到香港有一个带奖学金的研究生项目，我想申请，我希望能够拿到奖学金。我拟申请浸会大学的专业是金融与决策科学，岭南大学的研究方向是金融工程和随机优化。

我想找你帮我写一封推荐信。因为推荐信在评定奖学金方面将占很大的比重，我希望您能帮我写一个强烈推荐的推荐信。可以吗？

我先把浸会大学（截止日期12月1日）的推荐信表发给你，并附上我的成绩单，供你参考。
岭南大学的截止日期是12月10日。

然后结尾的感谢话，怎么说，帮我想一想。

谢谢大家了。
机器翻译的，就不要贴了，谢谢！

Answer 1

Dear Mr./Mrs. XXX （是姓氏，最好不要写名字，以示尊重。）

Hello, how are you lately? It has been a while since we last send emails to each others and I hope you are enjoying teaching as much as ever. Pardon my boldness, I have a favor to ask you.

I now work in an insurance company in China, and I recently learned of a post-graduate degree with scholarships available in Hong Kong universities. I wish to apply for the Finance and Decision Science degree in Baptist University, and the Financial Engineering and Random Optimization degree in Lingnan University.

As I am planning to apply for the scholarship, I will be honored if you would kindly write a recommendation letter for me. As a recommendation letter weighs heavily on the universities' decision to grant me with a scholarship, I hope you will write a strong recommendation letter for me, if that is alright with you?

I will forward the recommendation form of Baptist University (due date December 1) as well as my academic records to be used as a reference. The due date for application for scholarship for Lingnan University is December 10.

Thank you so much. I will be waiting for your reply.

yours, sincerely,

XXX （你的名字，记住一定要名字在前，姓氏在后）

希望对你有帮助~

天上~

注：为了让对方更明白你这封信的主题，把你给的内容的顺序改了一下。跟你添加了一个开头和结尾。另，如要翻译，请HI我~

然后结尾的感谢话，怎么说，帮我想一想。

Answer 2

Hello, how are you lately? It has been a while since we last send emails to each others and I hope you are enjoying teaching as much as ever. Pardon my boldness, I have a favor to ask you.

I now work in an insurance company in China, and I recently learned of a post-graduate degree with scholarships available in Hong Kong universities. I wish to apply for the Finance and Decision Science degree in Baptist University, and the Financial Engineering and Random Optimization degree in Lingnan University.

As I am planning to apply for the scholarship, I will be honored if you would kindly write a recommendation letter for me. As a recommendation letter weighs heavily on the universities' decision to grant me with a scholarship, I hope you will write a strong recommendation letter for me, if that is alright with you?

I will forward the recommendation form of Baptist University (due date December 1) as well as my academic records to be used as a reference. The due date for application for scholarship for Lingnan University is December 10.

Thank you so much. I will be waiting for your reply.

Answer 3

将中文译成英语
I am now in China, a security company. I just learned that Hong Kong has a graduate program with a scholarship, I would like to apply, I hope I can get a scholarship. I wish to apply for Hong Kong Baptist University majoring in Finance and Decision Sciences, Lingnan University, research direction is the financial engineering and stochastic optimization.

I want you to help me write a letter of recommendation. Because letters of recommendation in the assessment will account for a large share of scholarships, I hope you can help me write a letter of recommendation is strongly recommended. OK?

I first Baptist University (deadline Dec. 1) a letter of recommendation form distributed to you, along with my report card, for your reference.
Lingnan University deadline Dec. 10.

Then thanks to the end of words, how to say, help me think about it.
我没有给你写标题啊，你想到一个好的到 Google翻译就好了

Answer 4

I'm now in a Chinese guarantee company work. I just know to Hong Kong have a belt scholarship of graduate programs, I want to apply for, I hope to get a scholarship. I wish to apply for Baptist university major is finance and decision sciences, lingnan university research direction is financial engineering and stochastic optimization.

I want to find you write a letter of recommendation for me. Because of recommendation in judging scholarships will make up a large proportion, I hope you can help me to write a letter of recommendation is strongly recommended. Can?

I first Baptist university (deadline December 1) the recommendation form sent to you, and attach a copy of my transcript, for your reference.

Lingnan university deadline is December 10th.

Then at the end of the words, how to say thanks, help me think.

Answer 5

I am now in China, a security company. I just learned that Hong Kong has a graduate program with a scholarship, I would like to apply, I hope I can get a scholarship. I wish to apply for Hong Kong Baptist University majoring in Finance and Decision Sciences, Lingnan University, research direction is the financial engineering and stochastic optimization.

I want you to help me write a letter of recommendation. Because letters of recommendation in the assessment will account for a large share of scholarships, I hope you can help me write a letter of recommendation is strongly recommended. OK?

I first Baptist University (deadline Dec. 1) a letter of recommendation form distributed to you, along with my report card, for your information