Question

求翻译下面这句话 英语~谢谢~

感谢您给予的测试机会~
作品中的不足还望您指出 我会努力改正
O(∩_∩)O谢谢~

google翻译了一版
Thank you for the opportunity to test ~
Works also hope that you pointed out deficiencies.
I will try to correct them.
Thank you ~
不知道对不对 还望高手指点~~
感谢大家的回答 满意答案我就选个回答快的了 O(∩_∩)O谢谢大家~~

Answer 1

修改如下：

I appreciate it a lot that you gave me the opportunity for the test
Please point out the deficiencies if there are any in my work
I'll try my best to correct them
Thanks

注：首尾两个 谢谢，分别用apprecaite和thanks以免重复。
另外不太清楚楼主所指的“测试”和“作品”具体为何，所以只能大众化翻译。

如果可以，烦请点击页面中的 选为满意回答 按钮，谢谢！

Answer 2

Thank you for the opportunity to test ~
1) Thank you for giving me the opportuniy for the test

Works also hope that you pointed out deficiencies.
2) We also hope that you will point out the deficiencies in the works.

Answer 3

Thank you for giving me the opportunity to test
I also hope that you can point out deficiencies in works.
I will try my best to correct them.
Thank you ~

望采纳 谢谢
如有疑问 可以讨论

Answer 4

Thanks for the test opportunity that you gave me~
I hope that you can point out the mistakes in my works.
I will try to correct them.
O(∩_∩)O Thank you ~

Answer 5

Thank you for giving me the chance of test.I hope that you can take trouble to point out the deficiencies in my work,so that i can improve them.
不是高手，仅供参考。

Answer 6

对的！
作品中的不足是不是用 shortcomings或者 mistakes更好呢？
希望帮到你！