Question

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Generally speaking，the relationship between us students and our family members and classmates as well as teachers are good。We are getting in well with each other。 However，there exists some problems. Some students are to lose his temper because of anxious and study burden. They sometimes quarrel with others, which is very disappointed.
In my opinion, we middle school stdents should make our efforts to improving the stituation.First,we should respect of other people.Second,when we are not feeling happy, we can chat our friends or teachers or even parents.It is likely whether they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

Generally speaking，the relationship between WE students and our family members, classmates AND teachers IS good。We are getting ON well with each other。 However，there exists some problems. Some students WOULD lose THEIR temper because of ANXIETY OR PRESSURES OF STUDY THAT sometimes THEY WOULD quarrel with others, which is very disappoinTING.
In my opinion, middle school stdents should make efforts to IMPROVE the stituation.First,we should respect other OTHER.Second,when we FEEL UPSET, we can chat WITH our friends or teachers or even parents.THEY ARE LIKELY TO BE ABLE TO understand us and give us some reasonable advice.