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在当今社会，随着计算机的发展，日常管理工作应该从以前繁琐的事务中解放出来，从而提高工作效率。目前在大型书店虽然有一套比较完整的信息管理系统，而在一般中小型的书店中大部分工作还是进行着手工管理，工作效率很低，并且不能及时了解书店各类图书的库存，读者需求的图书难以在短时间里找到、图书的入库和更新比较麻烦等，不便于动态及时调整图书结构。同时由于不可避免的人为因素，造成数据的遗漏、误报等。为了更好地适应当前书店的销售需求，缓解手工管理存在的弊端，开发了书店销售管理系统，以满足当前中小型书店在管理实践和业务操作中的具体需求。

In today's society, with the development of computer, daily management of the red tape from the previous transaction should be freed so as to enhance work efficiency. Although present in large bookstores have a relatively complete information management system, and in general most of the work in the small bookstore, or engaged in manual management, efficiency is very low and can not keep abreast of the inventory of Books bookshop, the reader needs difficult to find books in a short time storage and update 、 books is too much trouble, which does not facilitate dynamic adjustment of book structure in time. At the same time as the inevitable human factor, resulting in missing data 、 false positives and so on. In order to better meet the needs of the current book sales to alleviate the drawbacks of manual management, development of the bookstore sales management system to meet current management practices and small bookstore in the specific needs of business operations.

Answer 1

In today's society, with the development of computer, daily management should be freed from miscellaneous affairs so as to enhance work efficiency (注：red tape 是指繁文缛节，用在这里并不合适). Although, at present, large bookstores have adopted a relatively complete information management system, most of the work in the small to medium sized bookstores are still implemented manually with low level of efficiency. It's hard to keep abreast of the inventory of different books in the store, to find the books requested by readers quickly, to stock and update the books, and to adjust the structure of book inventories in time. Moreover, omissions and mistakes in data can be resulted due to inevitable human factors. In order to acclimatise the current book selling needs, and to alleviate the drawbacks of manual management work, we have developed the bookstore sales management system to satisfy the spesific requirements in management practices and business operations of small to medium sized bookstores.

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Answer 2

In today's society, with the development of the computer, daily management work should from former trival matters liberate, which can improve the work efficiency. At present in large bookstores although a relatively complete information management system, and in small and medium-sized bookstore in most work or a manual management, the working efficiency is low, and cannot understand promptly bookstore books of all kinds of inventory, readers demand of books hard to find in a short time, book of warehousing and update more troublesome, etc, do not facilitate dynamic adjust books structure. At the same time because the inevitable man-made factors, cause data of any omission or misstatement etc. In order to adapt to the present bookstore sales demand, alleviate the drawbacks of manual management, develop a bookstore sales management system, to satisfy the middle and small bookstore in management practice and business operation in the specific requirements.