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IreadaboutthearticleCashforClasswithgreatinterest.Theideaofbepaidforgoodbehaviorwasne...
I read about the article Cash for Class with great interest.The idea of be paid for good behavior was new to me.I held view that students will behave better if they get money for their good behavior.However,my teacher agreed,He said we should work hardly in school just because it is the right things to do.Instead of aiming at money,we shouldtry our best to work towards our long-term goals in life.On general,those people who is prepared to aim high are more likely to achieve great success.Therefore,forget about make money ang keeping going even if there is no reward!
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I read about(改1:去掉about) the article Cash for Class with great interest. The idea of be(改2:being) paid for good behavior was new to me. I held (改3:加上the) view that students will behave better if they get money for their good behavior. However, my teacher agreed(改4:disagreed),He said we should work hardly(改5:hard) in school just because it is the right things(改6:thing) to do. Instead of aiming at money, we should try our best to work towards our long-term goals in life. On(改7:in) general, those people who is(改8:are) prepared to aim high are more likely to achieve great success. Therefore, forget about make(改9:making) money and keeping(改10:keep) going even if there is no reward!
I read about(改1:去掉about) the article Cash for Class with great interest. The idea of be(改2:being) paid for good behavior was new to me. I held (改3:加上the) view that students will behave better if they get money for their good behavior. However, my teacher agreed(改4:disagreed),He said we should work hardly(改5:hard) in school just because it is the right things(改6:thing) to do. Instead of aiming at money, we should try our best to work towards our long-term goals in life. On(改7:in) general, those people who is(改8:are) prepared to aim high are more likely to achieve great success. Therefore, forget about make(改9:making) money and keeping(改10:keep) going even if there is no reward!
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