Question

英语高手帮我看看这段话吧，有没有问题？还有翻译最后一句话，谢谢

Firstly, Cycling can see the scenery along the way，so you can enjoy the fresh air and the euphonic bird is singing in the moring,
Secondly,Riding a bike not only exercise our bodies but also help us relax and relieve the pressure from work and study.
Finally, If you ride a bicycle, you do not worry about traffic jams and be late for important things. 因为骑自行车能够自如穿梭大街小巷。

Answer 1

Cycling can see the scenery along the way这个是典型的中国式英语问题， 不是cycling can see 而是 BY/ In the cycling we can see
Secondly,riding a bike not only exercise our bodies but also help us relax and relieve the pressure from work and study.这句中 如果你不打算假助动词的话 那么要在exercise和help后面加上s 个人建议这句话改为 Riding a bike would do for our exercises as much as for the relaxing and reliecing from the work and study.
第三句的do 最好改为may 用 do 一是过于觉得 而是别扭。其实needn't也是个好选择、
最后一句 可以这么写 If you are on a bicycle, you needn't worry about the traffic jams and being later for the important things, since you can go through the streets freely with your bike.
希望对你有用~~~

Answer 2

Firstly, Cycling can make you see the scenery along the way，so you can enjoy the fresh air and the euphonic bird singing in the moring,
Secondly,Riding a bike will not only exercise our bodies but also help us relax and relieve the pressure from work and study.
Finally, If you ride a bicycle, you do not have to worry about traffic jams and being late for important things. 因为骑自行车能够自如穿梭大街小巷。Because riding abicycle can make you go through the streets freely 。

已经都改过了，希望您满意我的回答，祝您天天开心。

Answer 3

Firstly, when cycling you can appreciate the scenery along the way as well as the fresh air and the euphonic birds' singing in the moring,
Secondly,riding a bike not only exercise our bodies but also helps us relax and relieve the pressure from work and study.
Finally, If you ride a bicycle, you do not worry about traffic jams and being late for important occasions, because riding can make it possible to pass the streets and alley unimpededly. 因为骑自行车能够自如穿梭大街小巷。