Question

高中英语英文改错，有十处错误 写出更改的原因

I’m Li Lei，a high school student from China．I was here in Britain for my holiday．At around 8：30，in the morning of February 8th，I found out a lost suitcase near the exit of Heathrow Airport．I waited patient for some time，so nobody came for it．
    I had no choices but to hand them in to the information center．It’s a black square suit case，what is just as big as a school bag．When picking，the suit case was half open and there were some documents and a camera in it．
I hope owner can come back and get it soon!

Answer 1

1. I was here in Britain for my holiday--I am here ... .
(这里没有特别强调是过去的某一个时间我在英国，如I was in Britain for my holiday a week ago。可以理解是跟前面的I’m LiLei 类似，是一般性的表述，我现在在英国度假，在2月8日那天发生了一件事情......)
2. in the morning of February 8th--- on the morning
(具体的某一天的早上、下午、晚上，用on,这里2月8日是具体的某一天）
3. found out a lost suitcase ----found a lost suitcase
(find“找到、发现”,通常指找到或发现具体的东西,也可指偶然发现某物或某种情况。find out意为“找出、发现、查明”,多指通过调查、寻问、打听、研究之后“搞清楚、弄明白”,通常含有“经过困难曲折”的含义。 这里是偶尔的发现了一个行李箱，并没有是经过特别研究调查的找到）
4. I waited patient for ----I waited patiently for
(waited是动词，后面要用副词来修饰，因此用 patiently)
5. so nobody came for it．---but nobody
(我在那里等了一段时间，但是并没有人来认领，根据逻辑判断）
6. I had no choices but to---I had no choice but to
（have no choice but to do sth. 不得不做.....）
7. hand them in ---hand it in

(文章说的是一个行李箱suitcase，是单数）
8. what is just as big as----which is just as...
(which 引导的定语从句，修饰前面的suitcase)
9. When picking，-----When picked,
(when picked完整形式是when (it was) picked, 这句话的主语是 the suit case, 表示那个行李箱被”捡到那时，当时的状态）
10. I hope owner ---I hope the owner或者是I hope its owner
(加上定冠词the表示那个行李箱的主人，或者是用代词its)

Answer 2

I’m Li Lei，a high school student from China．I was (was 改am,现在式）here in Britain for my holiday．At around 8：30，in （in改on，具体的日期 要用on )the morning of February 8th，I found out(out 删掉，found out 表示经过努力终于找到，与语境不符） a lost suitcase near the exit of Heathrow Airport．I waited patient for some time，so（so改but, 这是一个转折） nobody came for it．
I had no choices （改做choice, 这里是单数）but to hand them in to the information center．It’s a black square suit case，what is （改 that was 那是一个.....）just as big as a school bag．When picking(when I picking,要加主语I，否则与后面的suit case 矛盾，会当做suit case 的逻辑主语），the suit case was half open and there were some documents and a camera in it．
I hope owner(owner 改the owner, 是特指，所以加the ) can come back and get it soon!