Question

我要加入一家外企工作，由于我英文很烂，请高人帮我翻译一下个人自述。

你好，我叫XXX，今年23岁，即将从西安体育学院体育教育系毕业。在去年的宣讲会上认识了迪卡侬（Decathlon），也对迪卡侬充满了兴趣，十分渴望能够加入迪卡侬这个团队。我除了具备一定的运动技能方面的知识，除此之外对市场，销售等方面的知识都是模糊而陌生的，但是我正在学习这方面的知识，同时我也相信我能够掌握并灵活运用这方面的知识。
我现在只是认识迪卡侬，还做不到认知，认同迪卡侬的企业文化，企业价值观。但是通过宣讲会，我觉得迪卡侬所给我传达的信息是符合我个人的价值观的，所以我对迪卡侬产生了非常浓厚的兴趣，使得我非常想加入这个有活力的团队，同时迪卡侬也是一个非常宽广的平台。于私来说，我可以在迪卡侬得到很好的培养和发展，于公来说，我不会当一天和尚撞一天钟，消极工作，我会努力。
我具有良好的大局观，语言表达能力，慎密而活跃的思维，冷静踏实的工作态度，强烈的进取心，诚实，不拘小节，团结友好的一面。我是一个做事细致的人，在做一件事之前我总是前后想清楚了才去做，所以说我是一个不喜欢失败的人，但并不代表我害怕失败，从开始做兼职开始，我一直是从失败中成长起来的。同时也有诸多不足之处，思维不够精细，往往能建立起一个很好的框架，但其中缺乏细腻的东西；性格直率，言语或许会过于直白；我的英语水平很差，口语发音还算标准，但是单词储备量很少，所以难以表达出来也更难写出来。我肯定还有很多缺点，但是自己看不透彻，人往往能看透别人身上的缺点，但是看自己身上的缺点却总会丢三落四。如果我有幸成为你们的同事的话，我希望大家都能给我找找缺点，我希望自己变的更好。但是就英语而言，我可以在短的时间内有较大提高，我的英文底子不是很差，我也相信我日后可以用英文流利的表达自己的思想。在人与人的沟通方面来说，我是属于慢热型的，这是经过了很多很多实际的经历，我自己总结出来的。因为我的面相和眼神过于冷峻，以至于给人的第一印象是往往一种难以接近，难以沟通的感觉，缺少亲和力。但实际上我是一个很热情，很爱笑，很友好，外冷内热的一个人，所以跟我接触的同学，同事都是在两次，三次甚至更多次的沟通之后才成为了朋友。对于这方面来说，我所用的沟通方法，技巧，都是获得过别人的肯定的，于是我总结过很多很多次，对我而言也是最大的困扰，到现在来说一方面是先天的，另一方面就是我确实缺乏与人沟通的技巧。如果要用一种动物来比喻我的话，我想我会是一头狼，我给自己定了一个很高的目标，我也一直在为此努力。
如果有幸加入迪卡侬的话，我不敢说很多肯定的话，但是我会尽我所能地做好每一件事。我非常诚恳地推荐自己，我叫张鹏飞，我非常渴望自己能够加入迪卡侬。
（额，我想展示一个真实的自己，希望高人可以帮我翻译下，非常感谢）

Answer 1

How are you, I am XXX, 23 years old this year, will soon fasten graduation from athletics college athletics education in Xian.Last year preach will ascend to know Di card Nong(Decathlon), also was full of interest to the Di card Nong, it is this team to pretty much hope earnestly to join Di card Nong.In addition to having the knowledge of certain sport technical ability, I in addition to the market, the knowledge of sale etc. is all misty and unfamiliar, but I just the knowledge in this aspect of studying, I also believe in the meantime I can control and use flexibly this aspect of knowledge.
I just know Di card Nong now and also can not do it cognition and approve Di card the corporate culture of the Nong, business enterprise value.But pass to preach a meeting, I feel the information that the Di card Nong informs for me is to match my personal value of, so I bring about very strong interest on Di card Nong and make me want to join this vigorous team very much, the Di card Nong is also a very wide terrace in the meantime.In private to say, I can get good development and development in the Di card Nong, in male to say, I can't be for a day, monk bumps for a day, clock, negative work, I will make great effort.
I have a good general situation view, the language expresses ability, carefully airtight but active thinking, the dispassion is dependable of work attitude, mightiness of spirit of enterprise, honesty, bumbling, solidify friendly side.I am a person who works delicacy, I always wanted to know to just do before or after before doing a matter, so say that I ain't a person who does like and fail, but don't represent me frightened fail, from start in part-time beginning, I have been growing up from the failure.Also there is the place of many shortage in the meantime, the thinking isn't enough fine, can usually start to build up a good frame, but lack delicate thing among them;The personality keeps a rate, the speech probably will keep white too much;My English level badly, the vernacular speech pronunciation returns calculate standard, but the single phrase storage measures seldom, so the hard expression comes out also more difficult write out.I affirmation still has much weakness, but oneself sees not very clear, the person can usually see through other people the weakness on the body, see oneself's weakness but the head quarter on the body throwing three to fall four.If I am lucky to become your colleagues, I hope that everyone can seek weakness for me, I hope that I changes betterly.But in regard to English, I can in short time inside a little bit greatly raise, my English background be not badly, I also believe that I can use English to fluently express my own thought in the days to come.Say at the person and others' communication, I belong to a slowly hot type, this is after a lot of actual careers, my summary comes out.Because my face reading and the look in the eyes too cold Jun, with as for is usually a kind of for the person's first impression hard is close, the felling of hard communication, be in need of affinity.But actually I am that one is very passionate, very always ready to smile, friendly, the outside is cold inside a person of heat, so as for classmate that gets in touch with with me, all of colleagues is at two, three times even the communication of more time after just became a friend.Say for this aspect, the communication method used by me, the technique is all ffirmation that once acquired other people of, hence I once tallied up a lot of times, is also the biggest harassment to me, say till now to is on the other hand congenital, on the other hand be I really lack and others' communication of technique.If the words that want to use a kind of animal parable me, I think that I will be a head of wolf, I settled a very high target for I, I had been being effort for this as well.
If lucky join Di card of the words of Nong, I don't dare to say a lot of words of affirmation, but I will exert me to work well each matter the ability ground.I recommend myself very cordially, I call Zhang Peng to fly, and I hope earnestly very much I can join Di card Nong.
(Sum, I want true I for displaying one, hope that the tall person can translate for me bottom, very thankful)

Answer 2

在等几年 大家就都说普通话 了 到那时侯你就不用烦恼了