请哪位好心人帮我看一下这5句句子的语法对吗?谢谢! 10

Mybrotherwhotooktoomuchtimepackingmissedthebus.Hockeywhichoftenbecomesviolentisafast-... My brother who took too much time packing missed the bus.
Hockey which often becomes violent is a fast-moving game.
Down coats that is also very expensive are very warm.
Henry who was the largest fish ever recorded in Idaho caught a trout.
We laughed and looked through the yearbook which contained pictures of our school days together.
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1 packing up。语法没错,但是没有用从句的必要,因为这句是强调因果关系,而不是强调谁,所以其实用and连接就好: My brother had taken too much time packing up and missed the bus.
2 建议把which从句放句末: Hockey is a fast-moving game, which often becomes violent.
3 不懂down coats什么意思,但是你的also放的位置不对,读起来很怪,also应该放在后一个be 动词后面。ig, The coats that are very warm are also very expensive.
4 你的从句修饰错词了,按你这句的理解,Henry就是一条鱼的名字了=。=
这句应该是:Henry caught a trout, which was the largest fish ever recorded in Idaho
5 没错
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