Question

高二的英语短文改错，高手进。在线等。

短文如下：
①Tired men was disscussing how to donate money to ②God ，and at first they couldn`t agree with each other .③Then each told their own idea .The first man suggested ④drawing a circle on the ground and throw coins .The ⑤money out the circle belonged to God .The second ⑥man add ，"We will donate coins inside the circle to ⑦God because God is in our heart ." The third man said ，⑧" Your ideas are not bad ，though I have a better one .⑨Let`s throw coins into the sky .Those who God accepts ⑩belong to him .So God can accept so much money as he can . " At last they began throwing coins into the sky happily .

短文共分为10小段，每小段有一个错误或无错误，无错误的打勾，错误的写出改正方法。谢谢！

Answer 1

1、was->were
2、正确
3、their->his
4、throw->throwing
5、out后加of
6、add->added
7、heart->hearts
8、though->but
9、去掉who
10、so (第二个so)->as
绝对正确，我找到原文对了一下。
祝您好运。

Answer 2

Tired men1 was改为were disscussing how to donate money to ②God ，and at first they couldn`t agree with each other .③Then 后加theyeach told their own idea .The first man suggested ④drawing a circle on the ground and throw改为throwing coins .The ⑤money out后加of the circle belonged to God .The second ⑥man add改为added ，"We will donate coins inside改为into the circle to ⑦God because God is in our heart ." The third man said ，⑧" Your ideas are not bad ，though改为but I have a better one .⑨Let`s throw coins into the sky .Those who改为which God accepts ⑩belong to him .So God can accept so much money as he can . " At last they began throwing coins into the sky happily .不知道对不对，希望高手帮忙！

Answer 3

1 was--were 因为后面有提到they
2 and--but 这个句子由句意来看是不需要并列链接的，but表示转折关系，这些人要给上帝捐钱但是无法达成共识
3 each--his 因为each已经表示了是这么多人中的一个，之前又提到了tired men 所以用his
4 throw--throwing parallel form 也就是并列结构， and链接的并列两个句子的动词的形态保持一致，前面用了drawing
5 out后面加of out of 表示在....的外面
6 add--added 因为全篇都是在用过去式的形式
7 heart--hearts our嘛，所以我们的 复数
8 √
9 who 去掉 Those已经代之金币了，没有必要用who来指代，而且东西（物）是不能被who指代的
10 so---as as much as 是固定词组 尽可能多 的意思

个人理解，希望对你有所启发

Answer 4

1 was-were
2 and-but
3 their-his
4throw-throwing
5money-coins
6add-added
7正确
8though-but
9who-which
10 so-as（小写的so） as。。。as 是固定搭配
可能第5个有争议