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请帮我修改英语作文 谢谢

The spring festival
The spring festival,as the christmas in the west world,is the most important days in china. It stands for pleasure,a big reunion.
What does the people do during the spring festival?it is special interesting and let me tell your detail.Firstly,each one of the family,no matte where you are,will try theirs best to come back home for having a compotation at the watch meeting with the family.Secondly,people,for exmple friends,colleague,connection and so on, will visit to ecch other in order to increase theirs friendship.At last but on least, children like the spring festval best,because they can eat mang of delicate food,get a great number of money(call ya sui qian),and put on the new and beautiful clothes.
In my opinion,the reason why I love it is very simple,come back home to see my father and mother and have a rest.

Answer 1

The spring festival
The spring festival,as the christmas in the west world,is the most important festival in china. It stands for pleasure and a big reunion.
What do people do during the spring festival?it is rather interesting.so let me tell you the details.Firstly,each member of the family,no matter where they are,will try their best to come back home for having a compotation at the watch meeting with the family.Secondly,friends,colleagues,relatives and so on, will visit with each other in order to increase their friendship.the last but not least, children like the spring festval best,because they can eat much delicate food,get a great number of pocket money(call ya sui qian),and wear new and beautiful clothes.
as for me,the reason why I love it is very simple.that is to come back home to see my father and mother and have a rest.语法错误我相信全被我改出来了。

Answer 2

The Spring Festival
The spring festival, like the christmas in the west world,is the most important days in china. It stands for pleasure and a big reunion.
What do people do during the spring festival? It is especially interesting and let me tell you the details. Firstly,each one of the family, no matte where he is, will try his best to come back home for a compotation at the New Year's Eve with the families. Secondly, people such as friends, colleagues, relatives and so on will visit ecch other in order to improve their friendship. Last but on least, children like the spring festval best because they can eat many delicate foods, get a large amount of money(called ya sui qian), and put on the new and beautiful clothes.
In my opinion,the reason why I love Spring Festival is very simple, that is coming back home to see my father and mother and having a rest.

Answer 3

这春节好假
and put on the new and beautiful clothes.这边可以用the来特指吗？似乎不行吧，后面这个and有语病
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Answer 4

Firstly......a competition ....
Last but not the least
用many delicate foods因为是指食物种类